To Create My Story

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For the 'For the story' Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards

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My story need not involve a person’s glory though I hope it will be interestingly oratory and preferably self-explanatory rather than overly expository. To titillate my readers, I could even make it just a wee bit gory.

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Valsa George

Date: 6/27/2025 2:35:00 AM

Quite interesting. I like the slightly hilarious ending of the poem. All the best, Andrea!

David Crandall

Date: 6/26/2025 2:38:00 PM

I praise your poem most laudatory!

Paul Bell

Date: 6/26/2025 1:35:00 PM

You can't go about titillating on a bible site, you'll be struck down. In saying that, I like the gory glory expository.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/26/2025 2:32:00 PM

I'm on a bible site? Haha

Jay Narain

Date: 6/26/2025 9:53:00 AM

Lovely poem.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/26/2025 4:32:00 AM

LOL- great ending, Andrea! BOL in the contest!

Ink Empress

Date: 6/26/2025 2:04:00 AM

Love the rhymes here dear sweet Andrea. A wee bit gory you can make it seem or not your story is definitely special in its own way as always. I love the flow and cadence of your word weaving especially love the line "My story need not involve a person’s glory" felt that deeply! The strength in your words are worthy of accolades! Pleasure reading your poem: sending you light always

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/25/2025 9:47:00 PM

Oh, what a creative write this is, dear Andrea. I love the end rhymes here and how you've made everything feel so intriguing here, making affirmations amid statements of one's self. Wonderfully crafted for the contest, good luck. Sending you best wishes and light ~