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To Cover Up My Covid Hair

swirling whirling gusting winds blowing debris here and there walking out I need a hat to cover up my covid hair to stop it blowing everywhere So hard to stand So hard to walk In forty mile per hour gales I make my way down to the sea I hear her voice she's calling me her waves so high so angry Exhilarated I stand to watch they nearly touch the sky Sheer power takes my breath away and all my negativity sucked within her ebb and flow so overjoyed I let it go leaving me high like a kite in the sky Refreshed and cleansed Revitalised and calm Gazing in awe I want more and more Her exquisite beauty personified Then the wind is subsiding her waves gently soften I hear a deep sigh ~ as if she is smiling ~ Contest Strand Completely New 2 Sponsor Brian Strand 1st PLACE

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 4:45:00 PM

She called and you had the wiseness to listen. Well done! Top prize. Bravo!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/10/2020 5:03:00 PM

Oh yes, I am totally mesmerised by the sea and the moon... thank you so much Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/5/2020 7:02:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved top win, Ann. Love the metaphor. Bravo.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/8/2020 1:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Line. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/1/2020 8:46:00 AM

Your words took me to a shore of tranquil breeze and waves engulfing me in music Ann! Soothing and mystic muse. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/1/2020 6:55:00 PM

What beautiful words you write dear Aditi, thank you so much and I am thrilled that my words took you to such a tranquil place. The sea always does that to me too. Take care my friend with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/29/2020 11:33:00 PM

A charmingly well-penned rendering, its articulate feel simply resonates, Ann, please accept my heartfelt compliments for your endeavors being recognized, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/30/2020 12:55:00 AM

Wow, thank you so much William for your wonderful comments and compliments. So glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you again my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/28/2020 9:41:00 AM

WOW! Such delightful imagery, Ann!!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/28/2020 11:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay for your delightful comment my friend. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/28/2020 7:56:00 AM

No better place to be Ann, breeze or no breeze. Heatwave is coming back. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/28/2020 11:13:00 AM

Many thanks Tom and yes a better place I could not be! Beautiful sunshine here, but very strong wind. Hope your weekend has been good. With kindest thoughts Ann xx