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To Chat With a Raven

Wind whispers through fingers of ebony black pinions Head cocked to watch me as he drifts past my eyes Apprising and appraising My place in his dominion Head cocked to watch me As he effortlessly flies To a graceful landing Atop a lodge-pole pine Then the head cocked again Ebon eyes locked on mine As if posing the question Without uttering a word What is your place here In my world?…asked the bird The question was stated As a guttural squawk Yet understood quite plainly If one can parse Raven talk On my precarious perch On my pre-Cambrian ledge I pondered the question As I looked down at the sedge Five hundred feet down the bottom lies Perhaps a bit more… or less I peered into the raven’s obsidian eyes And replied “not really sure, I confess” Did I come here to leap Did I come here to die I was rather hoping You could tell me why He croaked, with a fluffing of feathers “To leap, to die? no, not a reason so craven The reason my son, and a very good one Was your need to chat up a raven

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Date: 7/4/2012 3:55:00 PM
wonderful piece, there has been a Raven's nest outside my window 2 springs in a row now, they were my fodder for "Domestic Dispute".... a most heartfelt welcome to the soup , I hope you will love it here as much as I
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Date: 6/26/2012 4:00:00 PM
Those crows/ravens have had such a colorfull part in many myths! Light & Love
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 6/26/2012 7:55:00 PM
Thanks much Deb, Your comments mean a lot coming from a writer who writes much better than I about Nature. (yes, I visited your blog, and I always do before I make a reply) and much of your work seems Nature oriented, which puts your work high on my list.

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