To Cast A Spell Upon Thyself




To cast a spell upon thyself 
and lend a helping hand to those in need 
erasing all narcissistic ways of life 
and wiping out all selfish greed 

to live within this Universe 
as a child of God that does all good 
scratching out misconduct's brew 
as every human oft should do 

to breathe the peace of old Feng Shui  
and to exhale right down 
building temples of Holy Grace  
for the entire human race
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Date: 3/16/2024 8:12:00 AM
Your poem beautifully articulates a profound sentiment of selflessness and altruism. The imagery of "casting a spell upon thyself" to aid others and eradicate selfishness is powerful and evocative. It highlights the transformative power of empathy and compassion, urging readers to transcend their own desires and extend a helping hand to those in need.
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:42:00 AM
Thank you S, for reading and commenting. Only when we cast a spell upon ourselves can we truly make a difference in other's lives, :)
Date: 3/16/2024 12:32:00 AM
I love this and its soul warming dear fragrant rose. I wish the world would be more of such souls that choose light and to do good to others and themselves. I love your mention of feng shui and how youv used that here is clever unique and creative. Well articulated poem that hits deep: pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light today and always
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:41:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem, if we all did our part we'd have a wonderful world all of our very own, :)
Date: 3/15/2024 5:06:00 PM
Dear Rose, your poem is a powerful invocation of selflessness and compassion. Your words a call to embrace our innate goodness and to strive for harmony and kindness in all our actions. Very inspiring and nurture the spirit of altruism and to build a better world for all. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:41:00 AM
Let us build a better world together, one by one and thousands by thousands, :)
Date: 3/15/2024 4:50:00 PM
Casting a positive spell for humanity, Very nicely penned Vie
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:40:00 AM
Casting a spell that I hope will catch on like wild fire Joseph, thanks for your visit
Date: 3/15/2024 8:34:00 AM
"building temples of Holy Grace for the entire human race" -- the devotee lives to serve greater humanity...wonderful write!
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Joe we are all a work in progress when it comes to selfless acts of kindness, :)
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