To Care Impressions

Relations steadfast, sincere
Bonds of love true, unbounded
Break up, rust, soon wear and tear
Over time out of no care;
With trust steady, unbroken
And respect unfeigned, so true
The cracks be mended, tended
To stave off much deeper rifts.


Visual # 2

IMPRESSIONS Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/20/2020

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:46 PM
I'm happy to see you got a second place with this one. Belated congrats to you. Nette does not do many contests but when she does, they are very inspiring. I have caught up this far now with your oldest poems posted. Gotta finally get off the internet and take a rest!!
Jayasankar Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Thank you so much Andrea..yes I enjoyed while writing for this contest..it was inspiring.. Hugs and love ~ Ani
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Very nice tale of the efforts love requires. Nice penning Ani. :) Linda
Jayasankar Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much Linda... your comment much appreciated.. :)
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October 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM
You did this very well..
Jayasankar Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment Silent One... :)
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