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To Broken Wings

I don't know why your talking like your saying goodbye ? Broken wings I really don't understand the reason why ... Your a nice person deserve to live happy long life.. Don't cut hope with death knife.. Your legacy will always remain in my heart and in my soul... I'll read one of your poems to cheer me up if I ever fall.. Don't write about your end just write about your beginning write it all from the start... Don't cause a big hole in your soul from the death dart ... I'll raise my hands and start to pray... To you be fine and doing okay...

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Constance La France

Date: 12/17/2015 10:57:00 PM

Dalia, thank you for this beautiful write, I can tell it comes from your heart and soul, I write of death, it is my forte, always have, most here know that of me, I am not going anywhere, but having said that my health is not the best so my sister and I had a serious talk about my poetry and its ultimate fate... I am putting this heartfelt write in my favorites, thank you dear heart for caring Constance

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 6:11:00 AM

I know you always write sad poems , I really love them but I felt like this one is different , I hope u get better and have a long happy lasting live ......ur a dear friend for alot if us and some u don't know....I was honored to write about you ...lot of love and hugs 4 u my Sweet friend..//:)

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 9:50:00 PM

Is she Leaving, I have not heard from her in such a long time. Thank you, Dalia, for giving us your heart today. It was sad when she left and removed her poems the first time. I remember her as Constance The Rambling Poet. I shall miss her. But, I must go visit her. HUGS. SKAT

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 6:10:00 AM

No my dear she's not leaving but she's talking about death and saying goodbye , and she's a really nice person such as you so I want her to be optimistic about the future....lot of love and hugs //:D

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 6:04:00 AM