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To Be Understood

There is a longing to be understood Deep in the soul, like seeds of a flower Waiting to be seen, wanting if it could In pain or celebration, where it stood Whether happy or in a tearful shower There is a longing to be understood Words waiting to be heard, places they would Change experience that has held power Waiting to be seen, wanting if it could Through blue days, gray days and storms whirling should Through volume and quietness in the hour There is a longing to be understood Through ever soft love or hate hard as wood Through energy, tiredness, fear that cowers Waiting to be seen, wanting if it could To be loved, to be held, safety that is good To sit on a curb or tops of towers There is a longing to be understood Waiting to be seen, wanting if it could Heidi Sands 11/14/17

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Date: 12/22/2017 9:14:00 AM
I’ve attempted villanelle, but none as nicely constructed as this one. Excellent!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2017 9:17:00 AM
Thank you very much MD :)
Date: 12/2/2017 12:32:00 PM
Beautiful villanelle, Heidi. The message is a strong loving message. Very well-crafted poem. Sheer poetic artistry. Lovely write. Love and hugs always, dear friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2017 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. I always appreciate your comments and feedback. God Bless :)
Date: 11/19/2017 4:04:00 PM
Hello Heidi, I've written Villanelles and Terzenelles before, and I must say you've written a really outstanding Villanelle poem here. This one is a deep-searching and very soulful write. Expressions like ". . . ever soft love," and ". . . hate hard as wood, are perfectly done. It's a very well-conceived and well-articulated write!! Keep Writing and Having Fun!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2017 4:06:00 PM
Hi Gary. I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem. Thank you for your comment and support ! :)
Date: 11/17/2017 2:34:00 PM
A deep and beautiful write Heidi...Well written
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 11/16/2017 2:56:00 PM
Gorgeous villanelle, Heidi. Grace laced wisdom sprinkled throughout this gentle, loving poem. Exceptional poetry. Stellar bright write. Love and smiles.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Freddie. I appreciate your positive feedback :)
Date: 11/15/2017 4:13:00 PM
Words of wisdom dear Heidi...Loved it...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2017 4:18:00 PM
Hi Arturo. Thank you. I am happy to hear you loved this one :)
Date: 11/15/2017 12:08:00 PM
I think everybody wants to be loved. And Miss Heidi you expressed this so beautifully. Well done my friend! Hugs and smiles :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment Akkina :)
Date: 11/15/2017 4:40:00 AM
A common human experience, Heidi. Well done to write it as a Villanelle. // Barry
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2017 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Barry :)
Date: 11/14/2017 11:14:00 PM
This is an ethereal work. It feels so true and wise.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/15/2017 4:17:00 AM
Thank you Vermillion :)
Date: 11/14/2017 5:06:00 PM
Well written poem--you describe human nature skillfully, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Vijay ! :)
Date: 11/14/2017 4:42:00 PM
You did this so well Heidi... Everybody wants to be loved.. sadly some dont know how to love back..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. That's right. Everyone wants to be loved. :)

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