To Be Thirteen

I found a surfboard once,
Along the banks of the Cherokee Lake.
A dirty, stained, half-broken plank.
My cousin and I drifted it out
To see if it could still keep its head up.

I waded among the leaves,
In a shallow bay where our
Campsite smoked from the morning's fire.
Treading water, holding tight, I examined
My vessel -- I pulled myself on board.

The breeze hit my dripping back,
Sending chills to my toes.
I stood, stumbled, and lifted my
Hands; crucified by the mid-morning air.
Eyes closed, I tasted the water on my lips.

I found myself among the reeds and cold
Waters of a lake. Thirteen and Shivering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 25, 2014 at 8:30 PM
Awesome win Cory... Linda
Mandani Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 6:27 PM
...'crucified by the mid-morning air'! Very nice. I like it. Congrats.
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:22 AM
What an excellent write. CONGRATULATIONS on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:14 PM
wow, what a very fine poem this is. Too fine for just an HM. I LOVE the way you wrote this one. Great short ending line to go with it!
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September 24, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Such a wonderful poem Cory. I love camping and lakes. Your poem brought back some great memories and I thank you for that. Congratulations on your HM
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 8:40 AM
a deep write with powerful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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September 20, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Cory, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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