To be in love (reprise)

And I'm still in Love -
 (I) don't ask with whom
      maybe there is someone
                         ~ maybe not ~.

 Clairvoyance being prepared, still
     Moving, we are moving on, bathing --
--> in bliss, that blissful waltz

Flowers blooming, spelling out the
end of the I. 

Dreams of union, marriage, the
heart rejoices - You and I, we fly high
Above the cluds, the waves,
Hearing the bells ringing
We dance like embers, floating in the sky.
Alive, every face beloved, the soul
                                       is free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Alex Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 11:22 PM
Your verses capture a breathtaking sense of spiritual lifting, moving beautifully from quiet mystery into pure, airborne joy. The striking imagery of dancing like embers and the fading of the self reveals a deeply felt, authentic human soul. It is a gorgeous, rhythmically alive celebration of love and freedom that resonates long after reading.
Dove Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Thank you kindly for your lovely words. I am delighted that my little poem resonated with you 🌸😊May Peace be upon you!🕊️
Toney Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 5:48 AM
This is a lovely poem, Salome. I love the “We dance like embers, floating in the sky.” But if you want to “fly high above the” clouds, you’ll need to correct your typo. How’s the weather in Switzerland? 😊
Toney Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 7:31 AM
Salome, thank you for your kind response. This old man is delighted to have learned something new from such a gracious instructor as you. 🙏 As your name implies, peace continue upon you.
Dove Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 5:57 AM
Thank you for your kind words, dear Mark🙏🌞 I left the typo in there on purpose, after looking up what clud could mean. 😅👍 The weather is mild with some sun, some *clouds* and a pleasant breeze. I hope the weather is agreeable wherever you are, as well. May Peace be upon you 🙏
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