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To Be Ignored

Just ignore this
nothing but
letters
on paper
taking
a stroll
across
the lines

Out in
the fresh air
with
eyes wide
open
newly
released
from
a pen.


© Gry W Christensen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/24/2014 7:34:00 AM
Gry A very unique take on poem writing. You brought the words to life. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem.
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:00:00 PM
Clever walk in the park write.. Well played my friend
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Gry Christensen
Date: 8/5/2014 11:49:00 AM
Hi Dave, yes, they like their paper park. :) Thank you for your sweet comment!
Date: 8/4/2014 5:36:00 PM
well, I don't want to ignore this. I really like it, especially the part about letters taking a stroll!!
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Gry Christensen
Date: 8/5/2014 11:44:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks so much! Just a spur of the moment write. Thank you so much for reading and leaving my feedback. :)
Date: 8/4/2014 6:59:00 AM
Sorry Gry, I just couldn't ignore this any longer. I love your style and a your choice of words.
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Gry Christensen
Date: 8/4/2014 1:55:00 PM
Hi Jerry, it's OK it survived the attention. :) Thank you so much for deciding to read and leave such a great comment!
Date: 8/3/2014 5:27:00 PM
Love the idea of the words being out in the fresh air - i often get inspiration when I'm out walking and have to stop and write my thoughts down:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Gry Christensen
Date: 8/3/2014 5:58:00 PM
Yes, receipts can serve too! :) I actually would think it would be sadder not to stop or being able to.............some lines or thoughts could be lost forever............:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2014 5:42:00 PM
My Pleasure Gry - at one time I would write on the back of shop receipts if inspiration hit - now I carry a notebook but have even stopped driving on my way home just to write a few lines - sad or what LOL
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Gry Christensen
Date: 8/3/2014 5:39:00 PM
Hi Jan, love my notebook too! Impossible to leave home without it. Thank you very much for reading and leaving me such a nice comment! :)