To Be Fair

"At the Footbridge" Now to be completely fair And to stop every persons stare Rodger was not actually circumcised As he was a player, so don’t be surprised This was from wear and tear and his willingness to share 07/19/2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/3/2016 12:57:00 AM

Oh Mark I'm sorry I missed this I don't have any comment on the actual collaboration poem I will add it now!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/19/2016 8:14:00 AM

Excellent Mark. Let Jan know about this and she can add it to her collection.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2016 12:56:00 AM

I've just discovered the poem Tim - will add it to the collaboration:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 7/19/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thank you Tim - I am very new on this site, and very new at writing, My idea was to add to Jan collection, I have made comment with the URL