Paloma P Poet Free verse

To Be Continued - -

Your furtive glances

   darting the nape of my neck,

making skin tingle surreptitiously 

      in sideways advances

      charismatically bourgeois,

nonchalantly flipped dark tresses

playing demurely duteous coy games,

irreproachable attentive longing

  toying 'pon lashes fluttered fluster,

back's curvature arched a trifle in

  heaving breasts' concerted efforts,

pheromones released the sweet spot

   as seduction's scent wafted,

  blushing moistly parted rosewine lips

     licking whetted possibilities of

         hitherto untold steamy stories,

      yielding beyond curiosity's fiery impulses

           unfurling the twinkle of a dazzled eye

to be continued...

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 17, 2016 at 8:05 AM Always keep them wanting more...good stuff! You'll have people waiting like patience on a monument for the second part...if you ever decide to write it. One passion writer to another...nice work here! MC Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 9:04 AM I don't think so, was meant to be a cliff hanger, left up to the imagination! Thanks again MC.

Bukiwe Tiyane October 15, 2016 at 2:37 PM Wow, passionate :-) Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:12 AM Thank you! :)

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2016 at 2:47 AM ohh, passionate imagery lives in you, paloma... tell me more!..huggs Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:11 AM Thanks Nette, thrilled you enjoyed it. :)

Constance La France October 14, 2016 at 7:53 PM Wow, now that is sensual, excellent Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:11 AM Thank you!

Carrie Richards October 14, 2016 at 2:39 PM If this doesn't quicken the heart, nothing will !! (A girl would have to be dead !) .. The (to be continued).....may be too x-rated for the Soup's rules, but don't let that stop you !!! :) LOL !! Paloma P October 17, 2016 at 7:08 AM Thanks Carrie, never know where the poetic winds will blow ya. :) That was just my title, never intended to write a continuation.

Sara Kendrick October 14, 2016 at 10:53 AM Passionate...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Paloma P October 14, 2016 at 1:57 PM Much appreciated, thanks Sara.

Chris Green October 14, 2016 at 10:49 AM Hmmm, catching my breath, ok, damn Paloma, what is going on here and unfair "to be continued..." That's a tease if I ever saw one. Hot, romantic, steamy, alluring, seductive, sensual poetry. Did I mention hot? You sure do know how to manipulate words to make the reader sweat while reading (and re-reading) Really nice.