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I have put this under Limerick form..Although its Not strictly one in my estimation? Yet it has the Cadence i beleive.'

To all writers in the soup'

As i write here.' 
I hold freedom most dear.'
I value; all other writers too!
love me or hate me? Even debate me?
I will still be; even handed.. So over to youse.'
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Anaya Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 8:26 AM
It has potential, in a limerick it's all about rhythm and syllables. You got the 5 lines right...aabba. ;)
Maverick Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Also it was easier to end on ' you ' yet I wanted to use a Quite Aussie idiom in this 'Which is a recognised word' Its a bit clunky..Yet it implys Plurality also.'
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March 26, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Yes its hard to be precise and Lose some of the emotive Also i think between 5/8 silly-bubbles are the guidelines lol)) Anyway; it is well intended..In the long or short? may things Get mended.'
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