To all writers in the soup'

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I have put this under Limerick form..Although its Not strictly one in my estimation? Yet it has the Cadence i beleive.'

As i write here.' I hold freedom most dear.' I value; all other writers too! love me or hate me? Even debate me? I will still be; even handed.. So over to youse.'

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I Am Anaya

Date: 3/26/2025 8:26:00 AM

It has potential, in a limerick it's all about rhythm and syllables. You got the 5 lines right...aabba. ;)

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/26/2025 1:13:00 PM

Also it was easier to end on ' you ' yet I wanted to use a Quite Aussie idiom in this 'Which is a recognised word' Its a bit clunky..Yet it implys Plurality also.'

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/26/2025 12:13:00 PM

Yes its hard to be precise and Lose some of the emotive Also i think between 5/8 silly-bubbles are the guidelines lol)) Anyway; it is well intended..In the long or short? may things Get mended.'