To a Starfish

A tinge of gold revealed in sunset's blink
upon its face, caressed by foamed bubbles--
marvelous starfish, draped in pearl and pink,
lucent as  fluid rails of ocean walls.
I stoop to claim the gift left there for keeps
and hold it to the sky flashed with moonlight ,
to revel in this sculpture from tide's leaps...
its disc gracefully twisting like a kite
where a belly swishes with the ebbing tide
leaving aqua-rocks to glint like dimpled foil:
a glory belonging only to nature, that I
toss it back to its mother,  the imperial sea


Brian Strand's :LATE MAR 2018 PREMIERE CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/25/2016 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful! When I was a kid we took starfish out of the water and put them on the beach. When we got back a few days later they were smelly. Sadly we were naive and didn't know we caused their demise. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/24/2016 6:46:00 PM
A wonderful gift of the sea, Nette. Your poem really brought it to life. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2016 8:11:00 AM
A 7 for this well-written WINNING poem, David. Well-chosen theme. Janice
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Date: 7/23/2016 6:26:00 AM
Nice poem. And yes, the Starfish and other wonderful creatures belong in their environment, not as adornments in our homes. Congrats on your win, Nette. ~karam~
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Date: 7/22/2016 11:23:00 PM
Good action in the poem Nette, things look beautiful in their home...Congrats on your win. Sunita :)
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Date: 7/22/2016 10:22:00 PM
Lovely subject and write Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:26:00 AM
Beautiful piece, nette. Reminds me of a wahoo I caught off the coast of Florida. Irridescent blue and silver, shimmering, but when it dies, it fades. A pointless waste, so I threw it back. Viv x
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Date: 7/19/2016 2:02:00 PM
You describe this marine gift with pearly words, Nette; you are also gifted with a natural poetic talent:) #7+ Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/19/2016 1:21:00 PM
Needless to say, I revel at the beauty of marine life. Astounding view from here as your lulling images brings me to relish the sea!
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Date: 7/19/2016 1:18:00 PM
oh nette, this is beautiful, one of my favs that I have seen so far, good luck lady :)-luloo
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Date: 7/19/2016 5:19:00 AM
What a marvelous depiction of a starfish and what a lovely scenery dearest, nette! A seven!
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Date: 7/19/2016 4:15:00 AM
Seashells, starfish, sandstones are gifts from the sea I like.Excellently crafted form, and rhyme which slips so easily from line to line. Woman, I'm buying this!
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Date: 7/19/2016 4:01:00 AM
I am in awe of your astounding sense of expressing imagery with such explicit expression that it becomes palpable! I am faving this most beautiful entry that I hope will garner first place Nette! Outstanding! 7 : )
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Date: 7/19/2016 3:13:00 AM
absolutely beautiful flowing imagery Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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