To a Poem

O weep o willow poem of mine
I am glad they find you sublime
And take it as a spiritual sign
You discovered the poet's clime
         For out of great grief I bore you
         A child of tribute to my mother
         So I pray in honor they adore you
         While memory still its griefs gather

O poem just to see you, tell me
Of my impotency ... that I studied much
And can do no better tribute, see
No other alternative to death, no crutch
        Better than words to restore again
        The woman I want to live forever
        The love that brought me into pain
        O poem, you were all, all I got to give her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/8/2009 7:02:00 PM
Wow another amazing write you have penned....it is wonderful to love ...and with that comes hurt...and sorrow. Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary
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Date: 12/8/2009 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful poem of love to share with that special person.. grief is all encompassing when a loved one is touched by it.. I lost my MOM too and life has never been the same for me... I moved on but still feel empty without her.. this is a special poem from your pen.. treasure it... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:26:00 PM
hypnotic!..... and Deb's continuation!
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:09:00 PM
Words are the balm of age/ the gift of sage/ when all flees and even the white of eye reddens with rheum/ words fair words dispell the gloom/when hands are mapped with age and knarled still they transform the page/ the eye/ the cage/Words flow and mind goes to pristine smiles and the smooth curves which once were thy/ thy cheek/ thy neck/ thy hip/Deny me anything but the word for its magic will soon be all that remains of fresh and new.
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