To a Mouse

You are a little meadow mouse,
the lowest in the vast food chain.
You have no taste for flesh yourself,
You dine on grasses, bulbs and grains.
Your wise mama taught you to fear,
before taken by a keen eyed owl,
while she was looking to the side
at a pampered house cat on the prowl.

The predators are everywhere,
from side to side, from up and down.
The only time you can relax,
is in your den within the ground.
You wonder why God deemed that you
should be another creature's food,
and if he has a place where you
can be protected and not chewed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/23/2016 2:10:00 PM
lovely sweet poem, my friend - wishing you a wonderful Christmas xx
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:34:00 AM
An excellent ode for an excellent mouse - Bravo, mam! My best regards. :) J H Fleming.
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Date: 7/25/2016 9:08:00 PM
Very nice Joyce, I have a poem about mouse as well.... mine is cat and mouse..
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Date: 7/18/2016 7:05:00 AM
Joyce, thanks for stopping by! Yes! rhubarb pie, MY-O-MY!! but truthfully, not on my no carb, no flour diet! but i CAN COOK IT WITH SOME RAW HONEY & EAT SUM! (caps by mistake! sigh!!) this poem.....cool personification! if one is still, in the forest, these magical moments are revealed! love, and good to hear from you, my long time friend...jimbo
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:13:00 PM
I especially love the final stanza Joyce good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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