To a Jewish Mother / An Eine Jüdische Mutter

I bring this stone,
so smooth as ebony,
so you are not alone
and in my memory.
As it once was,
when we were family.


Your grave,
a nameless place
between some lonely birch-trees
and some fern,
without a gravestone,
without grace.
You never had a chance to turn.


My hands too stiff to wave good-bye,
my memories,
now cold as ice,
my eyes – your picture in the sky,
no chance for me to say good-bye.
No final stories
hence to tell,
I lay this stone for you 
with a sad  heart
and with a sigh.


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Ich bring dir diesen Stein,
so glatt wie Ebenholz,
und du bist nicht allein
in meiner Erinnerung
So wie es einst mal war,
noch als Familie


Dein Grab,
nur namenlose Stätte
zwischen einsamen Birken
und etwas Farn,
und ohne Grabstein,
ohne Gnade.
without grace.
Du hattest nie die Wahl.


Meine Hände zu steif, um dir Lebwohl zu winken,
meine Erinnerungen,
jetzt kalt wie Eis
meine Augen – dein Bild im Himmel,
und keine Chance dir auf Wiedersehn zu sagen.
Danch kam nichts
und weiter nichts zu sagen,
ich lege diesen Stein für dich
mit Trauer im Herzen
und einem Seufzer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/29/2010 12:36:00 PM
So sad, so loving. And what a well written poem, as I would expect from you! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:22:00 AM
Great loving tribute and memorial write to your mother...It is good to see that kind of love...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:40:00 PM
It is such a moving and heart-wrenching poem...reminding us of the horrors of Wars. I admire your your thoughtfulness in remembering someone, this Jewish woman, who possibly was your friend or neighbor before World War II had started. The evil of the human heart never prevails, only love has the power to change us. God bless you for honoring the memory of this deceased woman. May god bless you for your kindness and effort. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 4/26/2010 2:17:00 PM
life, such a treasure. to have lost a loved one is hard, never ending and always hurtful. may your words give you the comfort you seek. pleasant memories forever to you and yours. thank you for sharing. love chuck
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:40:00 PM
enjoyed--very sad thoughts
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:36:00 AM
I read your comment to "poet destroyer" and it answered my question too. I also lost my mother to cancer, when she was young....so I can feel the sadness of this heartfelt poem....but it rings true to all who miss their mothers and is a poem for all circumstances. Sweet and sad. Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/26/2010 9:04:00 AM
thank you for the reply i needed to ask to be sure. Now i read it for the second time, yes it is sad with the feelings of a lot of broken hearts left behind, thank you..p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2010 8:40:00 AM
A sad good-bye, to a lonely place of rest, if i may ask is this your mother or someones Jewish mother, who you found it in your heart to feel the sadness of a grave with no name. A sad memory, i think,..p.d.
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