To a Flamingo

Oh beauteous bird, oh regal flamingo!
How stunning is your majestic appeal
Scarlet wing coverts blazing your zeal
Dazzling persona of upside down aura
Bent bill articulating aquatic ballet art
Emulating dance of one legged stance
Ah! how your pink gentilities enchant
In crimson garb, thrilling doting hearts 

October 6, 2020
In praise of the ode poetry contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Theme: To a flamingo
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Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 6:58 PM
just wonderful, Vijay. Good seeing this again on the winner list. Congrats
Kauffman Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:18 PM
With delightful imagery like "upside down aura," "aquatic ballet art" and "dazzling persona" I am not surprised to find this on the winners podium, Vijay. So well done. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Back to say Congratulations on the win! Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:47 PM
Congrats on your win! a proper ode on a great bird! well done!!
One Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Such a great bird to write about you did it so well...
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Michael Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:21 AM
It's is a magestic bird...Lovely write
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.
Callus Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Your words bring out all the beauty of this graceful bird, Vijay. I am sure the sponsor will love this offering. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:11 AM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.
Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Beautifully penned ode Vijay. There is so much to love about the flamingo. Good luck in the contest! Linda
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 7:39 AM
Much appreciate Linda--many thanks.
Ball Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Lovely Vijay. The flamingo does make one happy just to watch them. Did you know that they are actually white and get their pink color from the shrimp they eat? I always found that amazing. Just goes to prove we are what we eat. :) Thanks so much for the well wishes. God Bless and Happy Thanksgiving JB
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Yes I knew that--isn't nature amazing! Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Canerdy Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:05 PM
A REAL ode, Vijay--a good one. Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Flamingos are outstandingly beautiful and they are so many of them at a time in one place but very skittish however and fly away at the slightest sound. Your write is outstanding as usual, well penned Vijay! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.
Sands Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:56 AM
This is so nice Vijay! Beautiful :)
Pandit Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.
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October 8, 2020 at 1:23 PM
The beautiful flamingo seen through a beautiful ode, good luck Vijay, this is definitely a winner. Belle
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Much appreciate, Belle--many thanks.
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October 7, 2020 at 4:17 PM
They are a beautiful bird, Vijay. You have wrote this perfectly! ~Angie
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 3:10 PM
this is the perfect way to do an ode . I fear mine did not come off looking nearly so Ode-ish!!
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate..I know you will win.
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October 7, 2020 at 2:05 AM
An alluring beauty eloquently depicted into so amazing poetic verses! An honouring ode worthy of every single praise and appreciation! Deserving an outstanding placement! My warmest wishes, dear Vijay. Regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Much appreciate your values remarks, as always. Regards.
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October 6, 2020 at 10:51 PM
Enchanting bird worthy of an ode which you composed so well and with all the grace that it deserves. Best for a win. ~~
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Much appreciate Victor--many thanks.
Horsman Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Brilliant poetry, Vijay, truly a wonderful bird.
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:23 AM
So very kind of you Harry--much appreciate--many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:43 PM
"Emulating dance of one legged stance" Yes, and they are so graceful. This is beautiful and elegant. Your thoughts bring a smile. Oh, to be a Flamingo. :) I think I can balance on one leg. Yes, I am sure I can, for a moment. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:22 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a delight to reflect in your thoughts. Much appreciate, Brandy.
May Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Beautiful write Vijay, best wishes in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
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