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To a Barn Owl

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I often wonder where you go
wise sentinel, who somehow knows
that days grow long,  time sways and bends. 
You stay awhile, become our friend
Then off you fly,  when summer ends

What becomes  of one we've grown to know
who holds the night, on wings composed

You perch, clung to a red-tiled scope
upon the ridge, the barn roof's slope
in the shadow of the evening's grace
a silhouette on moonlight's face

You are keeper of the nightly dark
a ticking clock, when midnight sparks
with one eye closed to mock our sleep,
the other eye revolves to keep
a world in check 'till morning creeps

When first the chill of autumn's call,
I look for you as twilight falls
But, halls of dark are lonely now
Without you there, wind can't compare
Oh, where, oh, where, my friend are you?
For now, I see, the roof is bare

Wind echoed, last, a midnight tune
it called for you, but you weren't  there 
in silhouette against the moon

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Date: 7/25/2016 6:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Carrie: It flows so beautifully. ' In the shadow of the evening's grace.' Your poetry reflects your beautiful soul. Love, SuZ
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Date: 7/21/2016 9:59:00 AM
I love your entry. Someone else did an owl too. I wonder if anyone else did firefly like me! I really enjoy the entries into this particular contest. I am jealous I did not think up this contest on odes to creatures!!
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Date: 7/20/2016 9:41:00 PM
...with one eye closed to mock our sleep... Love your poem, Carrie!
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