To 143 This Valentines

1 4 3 on Valentines... From Me

I was used to having you around
Even though it meant my head would pound
Even though my heart would ache
I was used to waking up and seeing your face

But everything happens for a reason
That’s what they say

You and I had our time
Joyful and sad days, our love was bitter and sweet like lemon lime
I don’t mind letting her have you this valentine’s coz I had mine
Mine was twelvemonths times fourteen
I was with you since I was a teen

Now a grown woman, and I am pleased, to have journeyed this road with you
With a smile on my face and a little pain in my heart
I wish you a Happy Valentine’s Day...1= I     4= Love   3= You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 22, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Dimakatso, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 24, 2015 at 6:02 AM
Hi Linda Thanks for a nice warm welcome. Thanks for the feedback! I'm lucky to have all of you! :-) looking forward to seeing your work -my poet friends!
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May 22, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Welcome here, Dimaka, I enjoyed reading your poem and hope you will want to read one of mine. If you have any questions, all of us here are ready to help.
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May 24, 2015 at 6:51 AM
I Wanted to read another poem of yours, but see that so far you have only posted one.
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May 24, 2015 at 6:04 AM
Darlene Thank you for rwsding and enjoying my poem. I will definitely direct questions to all of you for help!-thanks - looking forward to seeing your work too! :-)
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May 21, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Hi SKAT. :-) Thank you for the sweet welcome! I am looking forward to the love and beautiful work of the likes of you! :-) Once again, thanks for the welcome-much appreciated.
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May 21, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Dimakatso, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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