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Tits To the Wind

sprung from spring they fly

                                 liberation aflutter

                                 cages left behind

birdbodyfreedomspringhaiku

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Ts Poetry

Date: 10/10/2019 10:43:00 AM

Uncage them lol Love it Momo xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/10/2019 12:49:00 PM

Tee hee ;) thought you'd enjoy, thank you! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/27/2019 11:41:00 AM

Yes a titmouse, but my woodpecker and nutcracker simply went ganso jajaja

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/10/2019 12:47:00 PM

LOL

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/12/2018 6:38:00 PM

Going braless, Maureen? LOL. Cute little poem.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2018 7:24:00 AM

Ha! Awesome. I may have been bold enough to write it, but you've been the boldest one to say it! Love it ;P thank you <3

Pat Adams

Date: 2/2/2018 7:52:00 AM

Ok, I'm lovin' it.....even if it Is just birds!!!!...............80)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/2/2018 8:19:00 AM

Lol when I see a crow and say "just a crow" I apologize ;)

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/1/2018 8:56:00 PM

Ahhh, :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/1/2018 9:48:00 PM

Maria Williams

Date: 1/22/2018 6:23:00 AM

Congrats Maureen. A well deserved honor of POTW for a very imaginative Haiku. It is so alive with movement. The title alone is so imaginative ...Maria

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/22/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Maria! I borrowed "tits to the wind", I would love to applaud whoever (I'm assuming a "she") coined it, assuming there's one original source... the the words just kinda love to hang out with each other in my eye ;) xomo!

John Fleming

Date: 1/22/2018 2:15:00 AM

Hhmmm...how about: "The Rape of the Daughters of Leucippus", by Rubens -- now alternatively referred to as, "Tits To The Wind"! Love it..my immortality assured I think. Congratulations - still chuckling! Lol. My very best regards, Maureen. :) john

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/22/2018 7:47:00 AM

How did that painting earn that moniker? Lol, it doesn't reflect the "freedom" I abstract from "tits to the wind" ;) Thank you John! xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2018 4:36:00 PM

FABULOUS choice for POTW many congrats Maureen - the title alone deserves the honour I loved it the first time I read it:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:24:00 PM

Thank you Jan! I wish I knew who coined it, it is awesome, you know this one started with the title ;) xomo!

Marilyn Williams

Date: 1/21/2018 3:32:00 PM

Short and sweet. I love it. Thanks for sharing. Marilyn

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:22:00 PM

Thank you Marilyn :)

John Lawless

Date: 1/21/2018 12:51:00 PM

Nicely done Maureen and congrats on POTW

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:21:00 PM

Thank you John :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2018 10:35:00 AM

I really love this haiku Mo. Big congratulations on having it honored with Poem of the week! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/21/2018 10:14:00 AM

Returning with congratulations Maureen on your well deserved POTW honors with this fantastic poem. 'Tits to the Wind' should be adopted as our official female and/or bird lovers' mantra, don't you think.. lol! Warmest wishes my friend ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan! ...I do! lol ;) xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2018 8:58:00 AM

Way to go on POTW. Hugs Rick.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 11:18:00 PM

Thank you Rick! :) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2018 5:01:00 AM

Congrats on potw... Birds will be impressed with this dedication

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 9:07:00 AM

Oh wow! Not so observant am I, if wings aren't involved lol

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 9:05:00 AM

...I don't mean "merely" <3

Silent One
Date: 1/21/2018 9:01:00 AM

I sent you a message about it. Go to Poetry of the day and you will see a link to poetry of the week and there you are with this little deep piece...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 8:47:00 AM

I assumed as much, is that an actual thing or merely a lovely compliment? ;)

Silent One
Date: 1/21/2018 8:29:00 AM

Oh lol! Poetry of the week.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 8:28:00 AM

What is potw?

Silent One
Date: 1/21/2018 8:22:00 AM

Well you love birds, especially those in this title... Unless it is a deeper meaning, of a person who is free from her chains... damn.. that is deep... At least the birds got to hear it...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/21/2018 7:20:00 AM

I don't actually know what that means, but thank you :) I read it to my own birds, they seemed unphased.

Silent One
Date: 1/21/2018 7:16:00 AM

Especially the tits..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/20/2018 2:54:00 PM

My favourite. LOVE IT. x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/20/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Leanne! Gotta say my muse tickles me senseless sometimes ;) Cheers dear! xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2018 12:57:00 PM

I can hardly wait till spring. Even more delightful when the air is slightly chilled.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/18/2018 1:36:00 PM

I hear ya Richard. The best thing about winter is spring. I live for it :)

Roy Pett

Date: 1/18/2018 7:22:00 AM

Brilliant Haiku Maureen, love the tit.le too, enjoyed. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/18/2018 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Roy! A lovely day to you :) xomo!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/17/2018 7:53:00 PM

Lol, for a minute there I thought this was going to be about a bike ride…Never heard about a blue tit bird till now but at least I learned something! A clever fun nature write Mo!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/17/2018 9:32:00 PM

Tee hee, I've never had the balls to go for one of those naked rides. Thank you Che :) hugs!