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Title 4 Angelic

“And so it is, that both the Devil and the angelic Spirit present us with objects of desire to awaken our power of choice. There is an invisible strength within us; when it recognizes two opposing objects of desire, it grows stronger” ~~ Rumi~~ Though I will not bow to temptation Will I vow to stay strong ? Can I resist the devil’s vexation. For ever so long? Such niceties on offer I see. Can I now resist? These titillating tidbits please me. How can I desist? Is there goodness within my soul ? Do I see the ere of my ways? Will I keep God’s commandments whole, And reject Satan’s displays? Does the fight betwixt these two, Make me stronger to defeat evil’s winning, And so to reject all sinning? I feel the surge of power as I feel my need. To resist the demon enticing me. The devil is pulling me and must be stymied. Following God’s word, it is true purity. Inside there is a burning fire. I have the strength to accept or reject it all at will. I now can pull back from desire. Even stronger I have become and will be still.
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Narain Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Congrats, well penned poem and a winner.
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Thanks a million Jay , Best wishes for a happy Easter.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your creative "Angelic" write. Life brings us both good/evil to deal with. We need to pick God. What a great picture. Have a blessed day.............
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Glad you like it sweet Paula Thanks for letting me know. Best wishes coming your way. . From Wen
Anaya Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Congrats, glad you found Sotto Poet
Volumes Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Me too I was really worried.
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Brilliant take on the contest, SV ~ good luck in the contest
Volumes Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 9:45 PM
Wow I like it when you like something of mine ! It may sound silly but it really gives me a lift. Thanks for letting me know. Most appreciated. Wen
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Wonderful quote and brilliant write! I enjoyed the content and the angst such as we all feel at times! I think you have a winner! Good luck in the contest!
Volumes Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Aw beautiful Karen, quick ! swap places with the Judge ! lol Thank you so much for your vote of confidence. I am so glad you see merit in it. I really appreciate you letting me know. Best wishes for a happy week ahead. ... Wen
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