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skidding tires-

                              crying at her funeral




Entry in the Broken Monoku contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Joe. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:31:00 AM

Joe, Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/11/2010 1:25:00 PM

COngrats on your 2nd Place win, Joe!! Very nice Monoku....later, Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2010 8:13:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/6/2010 12:54:00 AM

Says it all Joe...congratulations on your success in the contest...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:13:00 PM

well, looky there, Joe, Mr. Newbie, you got a number two spot!!! It all comes in due time. Congratulations to you, and thanks so much for commenting to my blog! andrea

Date: 5/5/2010 8:06:00 AM

I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Powerful thought captured in just six words. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big success. Keep on writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 7:57:00 AM

Good work. congratulations on your 2nd. Love, joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/5/2010 7:41:00 AM

One of the best for sure!! Great job, Joe!! Congratulations on your win!!! ~ Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 4:58:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Broken Monoku contest with this one I already knew from my previous read would win ... enjoy my friend ...your poetry portfolio is growing quickly with so many wins... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 4:50:00 AM

A whole story in this one monoku, Joe. Congratulations to you. great job! -Robert

Date: 5/1/2010 1:41:00 PM

Interesting analogy with a chilling message. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/1/2010 12:46:00 PM

Good luck Joe with this great Monoku .. I think u also need to put your initials along with the word Title in Brian's guidelines ... just a little notice for u ...some sponsors are sticklers about their guidelines and rules... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"