Tis You

‘Tis You’

It’s a tempestuous, wuthering, wuthering day
as I set forth exuberant and merrily on my way.
I pause to hearken to the symphony of sound
as natures harmony plays and swirls all around.
Ignited flaming thoughts to fill a love sonnet
as I march on and grasp my dishevelled bonnet.

Singing with a lilt - the moors copious with heather,
I am blown to and fro like a weightless feather.
I hither towards the midst of my burning desire;
Longing making my feet rapid as if on fire.
If I was today my sweet love, my kiss to miss,
Nay - I must not surrender and think only bliss.

Romance - oh the seductiveness of it all!
Cascading down upon me like a waterfall.
Each rising, descent, of the sun as day goes down,
Submerged in his love I rhapsodically drown.
Since thine I have always pledged to forever be,
My ravenous eyes shall only seek to find thee.

I surge on until the glorious sight that I behold
appears suddenly before me like a treasure of gold.
The apparition manifests and it seems to glisten
as I catch my breath through squally weather to listen.
A tuneful, loud whistle from a source closest to my heart,
A call for lovers to reunite - no longer apart.

I knew my love would come being no creator of sorrow,
And I shall yearn again for him till it be morrow.
Thou art more to me than my own self -  all life together;
He of sun-rays, moonbeams, his divine light altogether.
Joyful musical notes, a bonnet, in the wind left behind,
As I cry out ‘tis you’ and in loving arms, myself, I find.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:20 PM
"I knew my love would come being no creator of sorrow." Such confidence in love. Pleasure reading your lovely poem.
Bowring Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 11:12 PM
Lovely to meet you Iris. Thank you so much for your visit and leaving such positive comments. Gratefully received and appreciated. Blessings to you.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 8:34 PM
This is so lovely and romantic. I like the reference to the bonnet and how it appears again at the end . " In the wind left behind . . ."
Bowring Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Dear Andrea, thank you so much for visiting here. It was fun writing this old fashioned romance especially loving the classics. Thank you dear friend for your support always. Have a great week. Xx :):)
Beaufort Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Such passion you have! I'm thinking this seems so well written and beautiful to read. This is so strong it makes me wonder is it real or fantasy. It's hard for me to deal with such potent purity of feeling since my own life is a jig saw puzzle of compromises. Just thinking about it makes me laugh a bit. TY!!
Bowring Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I’m an old romantic by heart Duke and it’s pure fiction. I really enjoyed creating this narrative being an admirer of classic literature - I love Hardy, Austin, Brontë’s. I had Bronte’s ‘Wuthering Heights’ in mind when my quill set to work and I’d read 50 classics so was really in the frame of mind for some old fashioned romance! Thank you for reading it. :):)
Volumes Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Christina this is breathtaking. Few poems make me wish they hadn't ended. This one did just that. The tender love it portrayed was divine. I couldn't have wished for a more perfect Ballad of lovers. Simply lovely. Thank you sweet Christina.
Bowring Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Dear sweet Wen, my heart was filled with joy when I read your heartwarming, so kind, generous comments. Thank you so much my dear friend. Such uplifting, encouraging comments to behold and treasure. When you are blessed with reading such a wonderful response as you have so graciously left for me, well, it just inspires me to keep going on the poetic journey as I know it does to so many others that you so generously support. Thank you so much my sweet, adorable friend. Love and hugs to you xx :):)
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November 7, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Oh what can i say! your 'cascading like a waterfall', to, 'i rhapsodically drown' is profound! You describe intimately with the reader the depth and total immersion that only this kind of LOVE can bring. Within nature and wild nature are we truly with spiritual love and here in your poem i really feel it. Thank you for this poem. xxjaninexx
Bowring Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Dear Janine, what a delightful visit from you. Thank you immensely for leaving such wonderful, generous comments that, whilst reading them, has made my night! Such a thoughtful, insightful response of which is greatly appreciated. I’m so glad you felt the essence of the poem.Thank you. Hugs to you for a lovely evening xx
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September 24, 2023 at 4:18 AM
“Thou art more to me than myself” i really love old english usage in poems, although when it is done as it should and youv done just that! Ah this felt like i was reading shakespeare! So good! You really are a gifted poetess so concise and so profound how you express love and romance in such a moving and poetic manner! I am blown away by this poem. Are you new on soup too? I dont see many poems here posted but i must say i can tell you are very experienced! And this i must fave! Impeccable!!!!
Bowring Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Dear Inky I am so happily overwhelmed with your thrilling, so generous, uplifting, encouraging comments from your own golden, poetic pen. You made my day ! Thank you so, so much. I value it greatly. I joined this incredible, talented poetic community earlier this year and have been immensely inspired by so many gifted poets such as yourself. Thank you again. I look forward to continue not just enjoying your immensely appreciated work and all the support you give to others but also to learn from you. Hugs and smiles for a creative week ahead. Xx:):)
Scott Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Christina this is so beautiful x a story that cuts to the heart of me. Thank you for writing such gorgeous poetry - this is more than mere words ;)
Bowring Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Sam, many heartfelt thanks to you once again for your valued encouraging support.Such a wonderful:) response to the poem of which has made my day. Your generous comments are so uplifting. Thank you my poetic friend. :):)
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September 18, 2023 at 8:50 PM
Too wonderful for comment (*deep sigh*)
Bowring Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Christopher - your ‘non’ comment made me smile:) my friend. Thank you so much! More smiles :):):)
Situation Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Love the rhyming and it as a whole.
Bowring Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Thank you so much ,once again, for your valued comments. So appreciated. :)
M  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Christina how beautifully you write poetry….. and look at your comments….that says it all!! Well done lovely clever Christina…Debx
Bowring Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Lovely Deb thank you so, so much for another much welcome visit. My heartfelt thanks once again for your much valued encouraging support. I enjoyed writing this one- it was fun! All the wonderful comments are so gratefully received and since joining this fantastic site with fantastic,encouraging, friendly, poetic friends I feel that I have improved already and hope to continue to do so as you are all so inspiring. Hugs and thanks to you xx :)
Ricci Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Good Morning Christina. Hello. Please allow me to say for all those who do not read I pray and what a dark world they must have. This entry is in true poetic fashion. It is written in vintage language and poetic style including the title itself. This one entry has all poetic elements attached including the emotive factor. It was a true pleasure turning to your page this morning. Be proud of your skilled talent that you share. Blessings (smile)
Bowring Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Hello Lisa. My heartfelt thanks to you for reading the poem and leaving wonderful comments that put a big smile on my face for the rest of the day! Thank you and your generous, sweet heart. Big smiles :):) and hugs to you.
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September 3, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Hi Christina. This brought back fond memories. Those wild and wuthering heights I know them well. From Hebden Bridge to Haworth, a tale to tell. I often used to walk that Pennine way. But now I'm down to a few steps a day. Tony.
Bowring Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Hi Tony. Thank you so much for your visit and reading the poem. So glad it brought back fond memories. The walks that you enjoyed sound glorious and have blessed you with wonderful memories. Warmest wishes to you.
Lindley Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:38 AM
My friend, that you gift us a great Victorian love poem with such fantastic language. I did truly so enjoy reading this very fine creation! A true gleaming gem. A fav too. God bless you..
Lindley Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:40 PM
My friend I gave your very fine poem a true assessment in my commentary. As a gem it is my responsibility to fav it! I try to be true in my comments . God bless you.
Bowring Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Robert, my poetic friend, once again, I am so, so elated with your beautiful, thoughtful comments. Such encouraging support as you give to so many is truly uplifting. I can’t thank you enough and for your kindness for deeming it a fav. Many blessings to you.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:23 AM
"Tis You" is a lovely write/story/ending. I really enjoyed reading this one. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........................
Bowring Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Thank you Paula for your visit and reading the poem. So appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. Warmest wishes to you. I look forward to reading more of yours.
Radice Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Whilst reading your lovely poem, Christina, I sensed the pages turning in Emily Brontë's one and only novel, I sensed a touch of Hardy and..I have to add..I heard and saw Kate Bush in between the lines! :) Tis You (It's Me..I'm Cathy..etc etc). There is so much emotion in your heartfelt lines here. I really enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary
Bowring Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Gary, thank you so much for your visit and lovely comments. Yes, it’s a shame that she didn’t write any other novels but ….what a novel it was! You are right- a bit of lovely Hardy thrown in as well. Whilst on holiday in Dorset a few years ago, I paid homage to his grave (being my literacy hero. What a moment for me!) I was intrigued with Kate Bush so investigated and can see what you mean. So glad you enjoyed it. My thanks again.
Labyrinth Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Gorgeously Victorian, visions of the Brontes, Emily comes to mind on first line of reading, but flows and billows into the arms of a wilfull ghost on climax. Beautifully written. I love it.
Bowring Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:04 AM
I love the characters in ‘Wuthering Heights’ and love the Brontes in particular. I had just read fifty classic novels (that one included) for a bucket list entry and was so inspired by it that the poem was born! Thank you for your lovely, generous comments and I’m delighted that you love it. Xx
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August 26, 2023 at 11:24 AM
A wonderful poem Christina, sensual , seductive and romantic. Enjoyed the read… Belle
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Thank you so much Belle. I’m so glad you enjoyed a bit of old romance! My gratitude to you. Have a peaceful Sunday.
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Wow! A breathtaking poem from a golden pen. You're an amazing poet Christina. First time to read from you, but i will fave this piece. Thank you so much for sharing. I love it a lot and extremely enjoyed this outstanding poem. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:43 AM
Dear Len- your endearing comments made my day my friend. I’m honoured that you have favoured this piece and thank you immensely. You have such a generous, giving heart that you bestow upon all of us. God bless you too sent with hugs.
Rolland Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:08 PM
this is beautiful, and the subtle punchline is wonderful, enjoyed very much have agreat week end
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Yann, my many thanks to you with gratitude for your wonderful response to the poem. So pleased. Thank you. I hope you are having a great weekend too.
Toney Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 2:03 PM
Christina, you’ve taken us on an enchanting, romantic journey filled with passionate musings. We’re left with you finally in loving arms as your disheveled bonnet blows away in the wind. Wowie kazowie! Loved it!
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:25 AM
Thank you greatly Mark for your visit and uplifting comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading the poem. I’m singing with a lilt and off to catch the bonnet …..
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 8:14 PM
You awe and move me with this excellent write.
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:14 PM
Many thanks to you Eve for your wonderful comment. So grateful. Wishing you a happy, creative day.
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 4:09 PM
I was led to this excellent poem and it is beautiful. I was taken away by your words. So nice:)
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 3:40 AM
Thank you so much Heidi for reading the poem. Such wonderful, encouraging comments. My appreciation to you. Have a blessed day.
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:39 AM
An exquisitely beautiful poetic masterpiece! Such a pleasure to read, Christina. :)
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:17 PM
Thank you, thank you Evelyn for your thrilling, encouraging comments on the poem. It has made my day. Very grateful. Much blessings to you.
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August 23, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Awwn, this is such a resplendent and romantic piece, swirling in fragranced aura of perfumed love.. Every line weaves a delicate tapestry of heartwarming emotions and the rhymes perfectly add to the mellifluous flow.. Love this so much, I like the way you've used some classic/archaic english words, already enchanted my heart!
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:28 PM
Gosh Hiya, thank you for your amazing comments/ thoughts on this old, romantic poem. It’s a honour to receive it from such an accomplished writer such as yourself and so many other talented poets inspiring me too. Your unique way of not just writing poems but understanding their meaning too is breathtaking- even your comments are poetic! I thank you gratefully and take inspiration from you. Have a wonderful day.
Ligon Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:54 PM
'Tis music to my ears. Flows so beautifully.
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:29 PM
Thank you so much Juliet for your visit and leaving such lovely comments. I appreciate it. Warmest wishes.
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