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'Tis nineseventeenPM! On the balcony, in a rocking chair In full twilight surrender Savoring this wonderous time capsule This moment of captivating tranquility So soothing I wish It would freeze in time Sweet nineseventeenPM! Not quite my bedtime But I know Morpheus will soon come calling The wind out here whispering inconceivable secrets To trees darker than the night sky Crickets are chirping beneath the moon Magical nineseventeenPM! I wish for many more moments like this Moths are darting about the lightbulb above me Oh, what a night! I wish Asteria would appear before me And strum her lyre under this twinkling Canopy of innumerous twilight stars So long, nineseventeenPM! The nightjar that sings for me has flown away I feel the arms of Morpheus enfolding me now I don't want to fight my sleepy eyes I intend to revisit you again at nineseventeenPM tomorrow Glory the sky with even more stars! Submitted for... BRIAN'S SELECT B, Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 06/11/2020 nineseventeenPM Poetry Contest/Winner(6th Place) Sponsored by: John Lawless Date written and posted: 06/24/2018

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Date: 6/11/2020 9:32:00 AM
Yelooo Bravoooo Fecilitation E.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2020 11:46:00 AM
I'm glad you liked this, Gideon:-) Have a blessed day!
Date: 7/17/2018 7:59:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Great imagery, well written. Well done!! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/15/2018 11:07:00 AM
Lovely piece, and very personal. Much enjoyed. Congrats on your win, Edward. Regards, Viv
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/16/2018 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, Viv!:-)
Date: 7/14/2018 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/14/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve! xoxo
Date: 7/14/2018 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/14/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Dale!
Date: 7/14/2018 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations! Beautiful. Creates a desire for it to be nineseventeenPM again.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/14/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, Haley!:-)
Date: 7/14/2018 7:54:00 AM
A lovely write Edward, you've set a beautiful scene.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/14/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, James!
Date: 7/14/2018 7:32:00 AM
Beautifully written Edward. A moment captured, savored, and shared. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/14/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much for placing me, John!:-) I'm quite humbled...
Date: 7/3/2018 4:58:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. I didn't know how to go with this one. Your's is so creative with wonderful imagery. Should be a winner.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for the support, Susan! I'm always cautiously optimistic when I enter contests. I can only hope it does win:-)
Date: 6/25/2018 6:44:00 AM
Edward.. I loved reading your poem over a cup of hot coffee this morning. Your write is interesting and it was a joy to read!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dave!:-)

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