Tis a Puzzlement

To say God’s non-existent I draw a blank
It defies all logic if I might be frank
        When a crisis that’s pending
         Has a real happy ending
And an Atheist is grateful, who does he thank?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:45 PM
congrats!! I liked this both times I read it!! a lot!
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations Ralph on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:23 PM
I always wondered about that one myself, Ralph. A class one act with this worthy presentation of wit. Congratulations with this worthy presentation, and thanks for your support. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Good one, Ralph! I think it will do well in the contest.LImericks should have a humorous twist to them and you did that even with a spiritual message! Luv, Andrea
Budd Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Hmm I like this, "who does he thank?" Nice write.
Belt Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Thank You and Happy Father's day to you my friend.....Larry
Belt Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Great one Ralph.....Larry
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Great one Ralph..who indeed? BG
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:37 PM
A wonderful Limerick with wonderful images
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June 19, 2010 at 8:25 PM
nice one, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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