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tireless travelers

without suitcases
    they surf skies drawing beauty
                ~tireless travelers~

adventureallusionbirdcutedestinyhaiku

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Bill Baker

April 12, 2024 at 9:30 PM

Love your Haiku, Maria. The geese are amazing to watch during their migration. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my dear friend. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 12, 2024 at 11:43 PM

Thank you so much Billxxx

Robert Sidwell

April 10, 2024 at 2:51 PM

I loved this beautiful haiku! Thanks for creating and sharing!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 10, 2024 at 3:11 PM

Thanks to you for reading and leaving your comment. Have a nice afternoon Robert!

Yann Rolland

April 6, 2024 at 9:59 PM

i am always surpised by their performance, thy come from africa so far have a swet sunday

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 6, 2024 at 11:32 PM

Yes Yann, you are so right. Thank you so much for your comment. Have a nice Sunday!

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 6, 2024 at 3:43 PM

hello Maria, i like to watch the birds fly into the sky. I like the sound the gesse make when they fly. love, Darlene your friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 7, 2024 at 3:28 PM

Hello Maria, I love the birds to. Doves and Red jays and Blue jays and geese are my fav. xx /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 6, 2024 at 4:10 PM

I love birds because they can fly. I wish I can be a birdxx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

April 6, 2024 at 1:03 AM

Great Haiku! A favorite! Have a wonderful time dear lovely Maria, best wishes and regards ~ AA

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 6, 2024 at 1:55 AM

Hello Abdullah. Thank you so much for your visit and the lovely comment. Have a great day!

Victor Buhagiar

April 5, 2024 at 2:28 AM

You are well inspired to write this haiku. Well done.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 5, 2024 at 2:41 AM

Good morning Victor. Thank you so much for reading it. Have a blessed day my friend.

Sotto Poet

April 4, 2024 at 7:47 PM

Maria, your haiku explores the freedom and pleasure of travel, demonstrating that true explorers don't require baggage. It symbolizes "surfing skies" and drawing inspiration from numerous locations without baggage. The poem honors the bravery and perseverance of real travelers without things. Well done dear friend.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

April 5, 2024 at 2:43 AM

Good morning Sotto. You are right. Thanks a lot for stopping by leaving your wise and kind comment. Have a great day my friend.