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Tired Souls

Tired of walking Worn out from the pain of life Feet don't fail me now FOR STILL LIFE CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/27/2010 9:11:00 PM
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faleshia,I have clicked on ten poems of yours randomly spaced and saw I had replied to all of them . gosh, I think I have read all your poems. You are great!! HOpe to see more and more. lUv, Andrea
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Mary Meade Stephenson
Date: 4/20/2010 7:50:00 AM
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This is a wonderful interpretation of the photo Faleshia...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Hope you will have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
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Larry Belt
Date: 4/19/2010 1:10:00 PM
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Great Write.....Good luck in the contest......Larry
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/18/2010 12:36:00 PM
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Good luck in the contest, Nice one,P.D.
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Gert W. Knop
Date: 4/18/2010 4:48:00 AM
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Sometimes we're tired for sure, but faith gives us new energy. Nicely written Senryu according to the 5-7-5 rule! Enjoyed it reading and best of luck for the contest...And of course thank you for your comments...Have a great day...Gert
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2010 2:55:00 AM
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I really like how you took this one, Faleshia. Best of luck! LUv, andrea
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/17/2010 10:20:00 PM
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Goodluck in themcontest, faleshia. A good interpretation
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/17/2010 4:23:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your poetry today Faleshia. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/17/2010 4:09:00 PM
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I love the title, especially!! Well done!! ~ Love, Carrie ....and thank you, Falishia for your kind comments! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2010 3:50:00 PM
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Great take on the picture...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/17/2010 3:36:00 PM
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I'll have to check out the photo, Faleshia. You have given us quite a compelling scenario. Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn
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