David Bull Poet Bio

Tired So Tired

I’m tired so tired

Energy is now redundant

I can’t move from my fortress bed 

I just can’t take a step out of this safe shelter

My thoughts are slow and stuck behind my body

I’m all curled up and unclean

I have neglected myself again

How can I rise above this lethargy?

Motivate myself from this state of my mind and shell 

Devious tiredness I can’t escape you

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Jon Arno January 9, 2012 at 10:10 PM Congratulations on your great write. Best regards, Jon

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2012 at 9:04 PM this is a VERY good description of lethargy, David. Congratulations for your win!!

Wilma Neels January 9, 2012 at 11:27 AM Awesome descriptive write David!! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;)

Joyce Johnson January 9, 2012 at 10:10 AM Congratulations on your win David. Descriptive of all of us at times. love, Joyce

Bob Quigley January 9, 2012 at 8:44 AM If this is a Bio, I hope that you find the courage and strength to move beyond this state. Life is too short. Good luck to you David.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 9, 2012 at 6:29 AM Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest David. Love, Carol