Joanna Daniel Poet Other

Tired Piano

Contest: Connect the dots
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: 31.01.2026

Lethargic languorous leanings ~
Lilting life, like legato, 
Abrupt arpeggios alarm
an agitant afternoon, 
Bleary brain breathing ballad beats, 
Belting burnt out broken blues. 

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Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2026 at 9:01 AM Wow. What lovely alliteration. Congratulations here

CayCay Godwin February 1, 2026 at 1:28 PM What fun you must have had pursuing an alliteration write as it is quite a challenge. You arrived at 'quality' and I thoroughly applaud you. An enjoyable read and an impressive result from you, Joanna.

Mystic Rose Rose February 1, 2026 at 8:07 AM Oh I can hear the discord in this music, well said,

Andrea Dietrich January 31, 2026 at 6:22 PM Such well crafted one with great symbolism focusing on great alliteration as well

Paula Goldsmith January 31, 2026 at 2:07 PM I enjoyed reading your "Tired Piano" write. I love this wonderful piano instrument. "Good Luck" I did "Happy Piano." Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............

I Am Anaya January 31, 2026 at 10:46 AM The alliteration's are phenomenal, love that word languorous!

Karen Jones January 31, 2026 at 5:41 AM Wonderful alliteration! Bet you do well in the contest!

Christuraj Alex January 31, 2026 at 5:16 AM Very beautiful and fluent alliteration. A short, sweet poem. In fact, I had not been writing regularly and not reading the poems in Poetrysoup for some time due to various reasons. I was missing your poems as well. I guess you are doing well.