Tired From Work

Feeling tired, back home from work,
you missed your usual train,
the whole day was born to irk,
the events had made it plain.

Your secretary was late,
the 'phone did not stop ringing,
you could not negotiate
the deal that you were longing.

Having had lunch with a bore
you had also paid the bill,
you're as mad as a centaur
and feeling distinctly ill.

Strained and sore, home you arrive
with day's impedimenta,
sound out gravel on the drive,
you hesitate and enter.

                    You were the first to arise,
                    although you went to bed last,
                    and still with sleep in your eyes
                    you had prepared the breakfast.

                    You saw him off with a kiss,
                    handing his brolley and hat,
                    left alone, like a goddess
                    facing the single combat.

                    Beds are made and breakfast cleared,
                    washing machine is going,
                    through the house, carpets hoovered,
                    all this is done while you sing.

                    You have finished mundane chores
                    before your young child awakes.
                    then off to the high street stores,
                    at the lake play ducks-and-drakes.

                    Hurry back home yet again
                    even though your poor limbs ache
                    feed the cat and the Great Dane,
                    think of what surprise to bake.
                    
One step, two steps and enter.
house is warm, it feels welcome;
stand stock-still in the centre,
look, everything's dinkum.

Slippers there waiting for you,
all's orderly 'cept yourself,
beyond belief but it's true
the mess has righted itself

Wife's on the sofa in shirk
lying there perfectly still,
doesn't know the meaning of work
and I guess she never will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:06 AM
What a cool way to discuss this theme through poetry. Work as seen from the eyes of husband and wife. I do think some wives have it easy when they don't have children at home. But it's all about perspective. I had to work as a teacher and then come home and do everything. My spouse didn't feel any obligation to do housework nor help with our babies. So that was a bit maddening to me. However, I was never a great housekeeper so I spent little time on those chores! Now retired, I love mostly reading, writing. Studying scriptures and TV watching. My daughter and her kids were forced to move in with us, so SHE gets to be my house cleaner while living rent free. Haha
Borg Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 2:29 PM
As you know Andrea, I grew up in Turkey. They are a bit old fashioned there and perhaps they still are. At the time it was accepted that a husband would do the money earning work while a wife would bring up the children, do all the domestic chores, including the shopping and cooking. What an easy life for the woman! Just being a domestic Goddess. Still, my mother coped, dad had it relatively easy and their happy marriage lasted till their death.
Crandall Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 3:38 PM
Nice representation of a hardworking man and a hard-working housewife.
Borg Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 1:53 PM
Highlighting her daily work in comparison to his, often underestimated.
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:22 PM
That is the way it goes sometimes on the marriage front, Pascal. Neither feels appreciated as they should or so they feel when all along their roles are so important. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I remember as a child or maybe I read the book to my children about a man and woman of very long ago both said they could do the other's job better so they switched jobs one day and found out that other's job was not that easy and what messes they made of job they did for the other. Sara K.
Borg Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Interesting story you relate, Sara. I think that men are guiltier of this type of chauvinism thinking that they work harder than their partner. But times they are changing.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Maynard Krebs would probably agree. lol.
Borg Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:22 AM
......................................beat-the-nik.
One Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Nice rhymes here... I do a lot of spoken word and this would be a good spoken word piece... Many will relate to you in regards to work and how it makes you feel... so many in a role that they do not enjoy... even worse when home life is not good.. there needs to be a balance..
Borg Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:20 AM
Hi Silent One, glad you're back and feeling on top of the world. Thank you for visiting my patch, What I tried to do here is expose chauvinism in one of its guises. Have I succeeded, maybe not, but I tried.
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