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Are your feet tired? You've been running through my mind all night.

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2015 10:05:00 AM

Hi Edwin :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thank you SKAT!! Who knew an old relic of a pick up line could win lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:40:00 AM

Edwin, golden line. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Linda :) I had to wipe some dust off of it just to see if it still had any value lol. Hugs

Judy Konos

Date: 5/5/2015 9:27:00 PM

DA AGONY OF DA FEETS! Thank you for being in my contest

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:51:00 AM

That sounds like a poem on it's own. <3 <3

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2015 8:21:00 PM

Let me know if it works. Congrats on the win. Sometimes the classics work especially if she is under thirty and has not heard it before. This brought back memories. I was never smooth enough to pull off the pick up lines.

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:52:00 AM

If it's good for a laugh it's good enough for me lol. Thank you Richard!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2015 5:16:00 PM

ah, yes, the old tired feet line. I think I heard this one before. Love the pic with it too.

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:54:00 AM

LOL Are there any you're not familiar with? Surely someone would never give up on you without using everything they could :) God bless!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2015 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Eve so ver much! Hugs and God Bless.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2015 2:57:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 3:37:00 PM

yes look at the contest results page lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/5/2015 3:33:00 PM

Seriously? LOL Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2015 1:51:00 PM

nice one

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2015 7:44:00 AM

aww Edwin this is quite charming just like you:-) Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest - I think it will fill even quicker than my limerick contest!:-) hugs Jan xx