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Tired Feet

Are your feet tired? You've been running through my mind all night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Hi Edwin :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Thank you SKAT!! Who knew an old relic of a pick up line could win lol
A   Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Edwin, golden line. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Linda :) I had to wipe some dust off of it just to see if it still had any value lol. Hugs
Konos Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:27 PM
DA AGONY OF DA FEETS! Thank you for being in my contest
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:51 AM
That sounds like a poem on it's own. <3 <3
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Let me know if it works. Congrats on the win. Sometimes the classics work especially if she is under thirty and has not heard it before. This brought back memories. I was never smooth enough to pull off the pick up lines.
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:52 AM
If it's good for a laugh it's good enough for me lol. Thank you Richard!
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM
ah, yes, the old tired feet line. I think I heard this one before. Love the pic with it too.
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:54 AM
LOL Are there any you're not familiar with? Surely someone would never give up on you without using everything they could :) God bless!
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
Hofert Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Eve so ver much! Hugs and God Bless.
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:37 PM
yes look at the contest results page lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Hofert Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Seriously? LOL Thank you!
Smith Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 1:51 PM
nice one
Allison Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:44 AM
aww Edwin this is quite charming just like you:-) Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest - I think it will fill even quicker than my limerick contest!:-) hugs Jan xx
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