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Are your feet tired? You've been running through my mind all night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 10:05:00 AM
Hi Edwin :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you SKAT!! Who knew an old relic of a pick up line could win lol
Date: 5/6/2015 9:40:00 AM
Edwin, golden line. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Linda :) I had to wipe some dust off of it just to see if it still had any value lol. Hugs
Date: 5/5/2015 9:27:00 PM
DA AGONY OF DA FEETS! Thank you for being in my contest
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:51:00 AM
That sounds like a poem on it's own. <3 <3
Date: 5/5/2015 8:21:00 PM
Let me know if it works. Congrats on the win. Sometimes the classics work especially if she is under thirty and has not heard it before. This brought back memories. I was never smooth enough to pull off the pick up lines.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:52:00 AM
If it's good for a laugh it's good enough for me lol. Thank you Richard!
Date: 5/5/2015 5:16:00 PM
ah, yes, the old tired feet line. I think I heard this one before. Love the pic with it too.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:54:00 AM
LOL Are there any you're not familiar with? Surely someone would never give up on you without using everything they could :) God bless!
Date: 5/5/2015 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Eve so ver much! Hugs and God Bless.
Date: 5/5/2015 2:57:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/5/2015 3:37:00 PM
yes look at the contest results page lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/5/2015 3:33:00 PM
Seriously? LOL Thank you!
Date: 4/30/2015 1:51:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 4/30/2015 7:44:00 AM
aww Edwin this is quite charming just like you:-) Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest - I think it will fill even quicker than my limerick contest!:-) hugs Jan xx
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