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Tired Eyes

See these tired eyes A poor mask for what lies inside Or, perhaps, a window to my mind See these eyes searching, searching to find A palace, a sanctuary, a place to unwind A bodhi tree to sit behind With a lover, a pen, a bottle of wine And an empty book to write lines These eyes of mine, they are kind They are tired, they are open, they are wise But until I meet you, my love, they are blind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/22/2015 11:55:00 PM
Hi Toby, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/18/2015 7:35:00 AM
Aww, this was nice..I hope your eyes get sight..a treasure of a read.
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Date: 8/16/2015 2:04:00 AM
Hi Toby, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/15/2015 11:51:00 PM
Toby, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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