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Tired

The day begins with a tiny speaker screaming at me I jolt from a disturbing dream (thankful) Trying to distinguish reality from fiction I collide with objects strategically placed throughout the house First flip of a switch brings blindness to my brain I am disoriented, but things come into focus Why am I in the clothes room? oh...I need to shower Onward I slumber through the house The shock from the water pelting my body begins to unerve me I start to relax, entering a familiar tranquil state Again JOLTING my body upright, preventing me nodding off in my new found solidarity I wait until the last drop of warm water is spent Apprehensively I throw open the shower curtain, lunging for a towel Crap! no towel No wonder I found myself in the clothes room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations Erik on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:55:00 AM
Sometimes it takes a couple of times to grasp reality. Good write.Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 3/27/2012 10:03:00 PM
Erik, has confusion written all over.. still it's an awesome poem, thank you for the deep read in your poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD
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Date: 3/27/2012 5:41:00 AM
I had a similar experience this morning. Well done.
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