Tipheap Might Be a Bad Town, But Fogswamp's Worse

(Interview with the mayor)

Dear mayor of Tipheap - I have a few questions
A bunch of complaints - a list of suggestions
You said you would fix things if you were elected
Or were we misguided? Should we be corrected?

The library’s worn down - to obtain you did swear
Some books and some mags and an unbroken chair
-- We'll get help from Fogswamp - we'll not need to plead
-- They're library's not used since they can’t even read

The sewers are blocking - the toilets can't flush
The streets overflowing in brown smelly mush
-- I don't understand - your complaint's a bit vague
-- Besides look at Fogswamp - they all have the plague

Crimes on the increase - where's all our street cops?
Thieves are rampaging - both houses and shops
-- Well Fogswamp is chaos - a lawbreaking hell
-- They've put bars round the town to make one big jail cell

Our schools don't perform - they're not teaching life's skills
Our kids need this knowledge for jobs that pay bills
-- Fogswamp has schools that teach reading and sums
-- They turn out poor vagrants and drifters and bums

So rather than fixing you claim they are worse
Whilst we're a bit ragged, you say they are cursed
And if you view Tipheap with full satisfaction
Then explain why you live in a Fogswamp posh mansion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Martin Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Hi Barbara, Thanks for your comment - glad you liked the poem. Please feel free to read it at your event - and thank you for asking :-) We often hear of Brunel and his engineering achievements, however few people have heard of Joseph Bazalgette. His ambitious engineering project improved the lives of so many people, yet remains hidden under London's streets. Hope the event goes well :-) Mark
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December 14, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Hi Mark, I have been invited to read at non-paying event in memory of Joseph Bazalgette, 19th century engineer who designed the London sewers. I would like to read your poem about Tipheap and Fogswamp. Could you let me know whether you would give permission for this, please. Barbara Goldstein
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Great! Congratulations, Mark!
Martin Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Kim for taking the time to read and comment. :-)
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Hi Mark, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
Martin Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Alexis! :-)
Maverick Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Love it Mark, good to see your place here'
Martin Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks Joe - glad you enjoyed
Nayak Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 12:18 PM
Dear Mark, this one is unique write! both places have a list of grievances....Mayor is sure to be screwed up....enjoyed your write! Congratulations!!!//love,Anu:)
Martin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Thanks Anu! :-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Different and very nicely written. I wouldn't want to live in either place. Thanks for being in the contest and Congratulations on your win.
Martin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for your comments and taking the time to read my entry. Bit of a challenge, but enjoyed taking part. :-)
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