Tiny White Canoe

Beneath the hanging branches 
of the weeping willow trees.

Along the winding river
so very hard to see.

On a lazy summer day
floats a tiny white canoe.

The water lapping at it's sides 
beats a soft tattoo.

Cradled in it's center
quite out of view.

Lays a small Indian boy
sound asleep named Cuc'koo.

What a way to spend
a sultry afternoon.

Drifting into dreamland
in a tiny white canoe.

This poem is part of a series including    Sunset Reverie, A Night of Dreams, Days End and An Evening by The Lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Leary Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Nice story... beautiful imagery! Terry
Allen Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Thanks. Imagery is the quailty that you seem to have in abundance also and I think that is why I enjoy your poetry so much. Huggs friend TLee
Rhinem Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Smile ˜ Very Lovely This Pleasant Rhyme Amid Serenities Backdrop, My Dear Beautiful Terry * Although, I Could Not Help Reflecting Upon Jason From Friday the 13th ˜ Hahaha, Stay Beautiful Baby Girl * My Love to You, John!:) ˜
Allen Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 4:42 PM
John soup mail in 20 min
Allen Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Friday the 13th is usually my luckiest day of the year. I'm not sure why. How young will you be this year? My B Day just past as I am a child of the spring when everything is pale green, colorful flowers fresh and new. May life make your heart as loving as your words. TLee
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April 30, 2012 at 11:18 AM
....Speaking of Friday the 13th, Tis My Birthday This Year ˜
Macfarlane Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Beautiful story put into words. Hugs
Allen Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 7:28 PM
Hi Cecilia. I am glad that you liked my little story. Thank you for your kind words. Huggs TLee
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 7:07 AM
Superb Imagery...I enjoyed this much.
Allen Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Elliott. I thought I had peplied to you on this long ago. I was reviewing some of my poetry and found that I hadn't so sorry. This was around the time I had my stroke. I guess my brain took more of a vacation than I thought. lol. Thanks for your kind words and time to review.
Poet Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 4:46 AM
Wonderful picture of lazy summer day by you here.Enjoyed reading it.
Allen Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 5:02 AM
There you are missed you. So glad you liked it. I hit a winfall and was able to pop out with two poems this evening. May you cup of the day overflow with happiness. Huggs TLee
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