Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Tints To Switch-Echo Form

What women's issues do we address?
Echo, a dress
Who can purify her, whom I adore?
Echo, a door
If art melts, rocks can love to tune a lyre.
Echo - Liar
What's that raining down from above?
Echo, love
What do you yearn to believe?
Echo, leave
Is there something I should learn?
Echo, earn
Or someone I would betray.
Echo, disarray
Now tell me, Echo, how I may get by her.
Echo, buy her.
As mine, no doubt, I will be her sweet.
Echo, her feet
Is there any way to calm her anger?
Echo, hang her.
Love do you reign over the thunder?
Echo, no under

Written: January 20, 2023

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Linda Alice Fowler January 22, 2023 at 6:58 AM Creative and interesting form Lasaad. You've done a great job with it! Congratulations on your win! :)

Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2023 at 3:38 PM Interesting, especially at the end. Love do you reign over the thunder…no, under…

Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2023 at 1:00 PM A very creative with with a beautiful picture. Have a blessed day/weekend...........

Beryl Edmonds January 20, 2023 at 9:57 AM An enjoyable read Sotto… How does one get into a woman’s Heart - Echo, love her with all of yours… Belle :)

Victor Buhagiar January 20, 2023 at 9:32 AM Quite original, having each verse echoing its last part word.