Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Tingle and Twitch

When thoughts of you Soup ladies fill my brain
I tingle and twitch and forget my name
See what you do
You darlings you
You fillies are sweeter than a cup of aspertame


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal July 19, 2015 at 11:38 PM Let me remind you - you are Jack, the awesome, sweet and silllllyyyyyyy poet! This is why we ladies come back for more! : D Always, Laura

Carol Eastman July 18, 2015 at 12:16 PM Bet you tell that to all the girls... Oh, Wait! You just did... LOL...

Lindsay Laurie July 18, 2015 at 12:13 AM G'day young Jack... these Soup ladies appear to be more like the pied piper to you Jack - Lindsay Jack Ellison July 18, 2015 at 7:37 AM Love my Soup ladies... what can I say!!!