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Tingle Melodies ~ ringing on soft cool winds, dangling from tiny strings in metallic forms Swaying in harmony with your smile reflecting the mid day sun in glimmering highlights of whipped cream whispers on wings of stained glass dreams For it was that day you kissed me, for the very first time ~ (When buttercups blushed as I held them to your chin) and my lips tingled, unending, understanding this was more than just a touching of skin, a melted meeting of two ~Music called to us from the branches above, serenading our hearts in sweet blissful sounds on soft grasses, fingers intertwined~ Your eyes, hypnotized me there, in that place and you kissed me again…this one held Passion breathing, love had found me coiled about me and clung to me On that day, unlike any other I could imagine…I fell for you Now as cool winds blow and leaves cascade in multicolored waves That wind chime, suspended from that old maple rings, singing sweetly of that first kiss, a musical remembrance of that day of which no reminder is needed ~ for my lips they still tingle 8/24/18 For the Wind Chimes Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/1/2018 2:21:00 PM
gosh I'm tingling reading this little gem Chris. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan. It was an honor to place so high in the contest.
Date: 8/30/2018 11:18:00 AM
Easy to feel the love in this beautiful piece Chris, congratulations...
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie, I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 8/29/2018 4:13:00 PM
I loved this romantic beauty Chris! Congratulations on your first place win! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Agnes
Date: 8/29/2018 2:25:00 PM
Living next to someone with highly annoying sounding wind chimes you have softened the blow with this beautifully romantic take on the theme. Congratulations on your win, too. Wendy
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 2:32:00 PM
I am happy I could help out with that. : ) Thanks so much Wendy.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale.
Date: 8/29/2018 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top win, Chris. Just gorgeous, this poem. Gorgeous!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 1:59:00 PM
Wow, thank you so very much Edward. I am honored you enjoyed my poem enough to place it so high in your contest. Thank you again.
Date: 8/28/2018 5:39:00 PM
Simply gorgeous, Chris. I think you enjoy writing of romance a lot! I know romance ends up being MY "go to" theme much more than just a little! I would score this high if I were the judge!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Andrea and you are right. Romance is one of my favorite themes to write. I appreciate you stopping by
Date: 8/28/2018 7:47:00 AM
For my lips they still tingle-Who could think of such an ardent line..if not ',The Romantic Poet' of ps.Fantastico :)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I always smile when you stop by
Date: 8/27/2018 11:51:00 AM
"for my lips they still tingle" Such a wonderful feeling indeed. After reading your thoughts, my entire being seems to tingle. This is so beautiful and romantic. The mood is breathtaking. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you so very much Brandy.
Date: 8/24/2018 6:42:00 PM
You'll win!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/27/2018 10:23:00 AM
I am not so sure about that but I am thrilled you liked it. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 8/24/2018 3:36:00 PM
Favorite part along with last line: Now as cool winds blow and leaves cascade in multicolored waves. Love the image, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/27/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.

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