Tincture

Figment Fragment Fracture Deep cut Blood stains Pain punctures Iodine bites Torn flesh Scar tissue Iodine ooze Blood dyed Strange tint Wander Broken Wonder Puncture Poignant Authentic Pain hurls Blood clots Healing begins Leon Enriquez 27 Apr 2014 Singapore

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/27/2014 2:25:00 PM

Hi Leon! No gain without pain. Another pleasant write from your able pen. cu my friend. // paul

Leon Enriquez
Date: 4/27/2014 5:04:00 PM

Dear Paul : Thank you. Leon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/27/2014 8:58:00 AM

This is a most interesting piece. Sometime healing can only take place with the shedding of blood. I know this to be true, without the Shedding of my Savior's blood I would not have known forgiveness.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 4/27/2014 9:21:00 AM

Dear Richard: Glad this work brought you some delight. Thank you. Leon