Timing

He was my best friend, 
I'd call him for anything,
but the timing meant everything.
 I know that smile
It's from the heart
You took my hand
We made a start.
 With every struggle
You were there to fight, even when I was wrong you stood by me as if I was right.
 You took my heart,
We went so far
Every night being reminded I was your shining star.
 My angel is what I called you, the reason behind it you never knew.
Your love saved me.
For once I felt free.
I couldn't figure out who I was, you made me realize the person I wanted to be.
 All the chemistry that we had,
I never once thought it could all turn bad.
 I'll always remember those dark brown eyes, and you holding me close as we stared at the skies.
 I still think of you night and day,
before I sleep it's for you I pray.
 I'll never regret the time we spent.
I said "I love you" , pure love is what I meant. 
 You were my angel,
I was your star,
We could call each other for anything, but the timing meant everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/13/2012 2:17:00 AM
Lovely write Amanda! Love the theme and the subtext. Nice!
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:33:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2012 10:36:00 PM
I like this very nice. Sincere emotions and kind sentiments. Lots of fond memories of love.
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