Timing

Your loss 
my gain
your pain
my pain
I waited
you pouted
you shouted
I was calm
I was sure
you were slippery
your timing sucked
you showed your hand
no one believes you
pits is rampant
they whisper now behind their hands
your a fool
but I would have waited forever
to take my place in his heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dyer Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on being featured it is deserved keep up the good work
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November 11, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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November 11, 2009 at 8:40 AM
congrats, its very good. -Kevin
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November 11, 2009 at 3:28 AM
Congratulations Veronica, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. My favorite line is "pits is rampant..." I remember the pits! Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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November 10, 2009 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Veronica. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Veronica, Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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November 9, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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November 9, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week >> James
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