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Timing

Your loss my gain your pain my pain I waited you pouted you shouted I was calm I was sure you were slippery your timing sucked you showed your hand no one believes you pits is rampant they whisper now behind their hands your a fool but I would have waited forever to take my place in his heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/11/2009 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on being featured it is deserved keep up the good work
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:10:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/11/2009 8:40:00 AM
congrats, its very good. -Kevin
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations Veronica, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It was enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. My favorite line is "pits is rampant..." I remember the pits! Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Veronica. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 3:16:00 PM
Veronica, Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/9/2009 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week >> James
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