Times Were Tough

I come from down in the valley, there, my father's house shines hard and bright in the darkness on the edge of town, like my memories calling so cold and alone troubled times had come to my hometown times were tough, love was not enough to feed us and keep us warm the greedy thieves that came around brought death to my hometown my father once told me, with every wish there comes a curse now, I understand what he meant you choose the chance you take still, at the end of every hard day, people find some reason to believe My hometown lays waiting for rebirth maybe everything that dies someday comes back By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 5, 2012 for Sing a Song a Poem contest (Tracie~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver) Eighth Place *Bruce Springsteen lyrics I come from down in the valley - The River My father's house shines hard and bright - My Father's House In the darkness on the edge of town - In the Darkness on the Edge of Town Calling and calling so cold and alone - My Father's House Troubled times had come to my hometown - My Hometown Times were tough, love was not enough - When You're Alone The greedy thieves that came around brought death to my hometown - Death to My Hometown With every wish there comes a curse - With Every Wish You choose the chance you take - The Price You Pay Still at the end of every hard day, people find some reason to believe - Reason To Believe Maybe everything that dies someday comes back - Atlantic City

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Date: 3/27/2012 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda!!!on your win in Tracie's contest!! Well deserved and Well Done...big huggsss,love~deb
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Date: 3/27/2012 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:53:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a super stunning win for these great musical classic selections luv.. awesome choices ..
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Impressive write. Enjoyed. Great job, my friend. Nice going. luv and huggs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda for your kind comment re my poem. I am glad that it gave you fond memories of your Dad. Yes, I also enjoy Blessed Assurance - it is a great old hymn. Love, Maureen
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Date: 3/6/2012 3:56:00 PM
nicely wrote. thanks for comments on my poem. i often tend to look at the back of cd's and come up with some cool poems!!
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Date: 3/6/2012 2:58:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..If written for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..I do hope that job opportunities come back for Americans..Families are hurting, communities are hurting, and states are hurting.Thanks for the kind reviews of my work...Sara
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:54:00 PM
Bravo, Rhonda! You not only chose one of the best artists, but kept the spirit of his original songs in your poem. Springsteen grew up just a few miles from where I did, so I too have seen hard times come to my hometown. When I pray for economic revival, I feel like I'm "Dancing in the Dark." Awesome entry for this great contest. Winning wishes for you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:49:00 AM
Rhonda I wrote you all a blog on how to put the picture in the poem, I can't put the characters here or in soup mail which I need to to show you, if you can't find, or don't get the PAST BLOG [there's a tab above my current blog which leads to past blogs] email me aleezadelta@aol.com Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:52:00 AM
Rhonda you chose a great artist, love the poem and Bruce..David
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:06:00 AM
by the way, it's too bad you are allergic to cats. I'd hate to be allergic . I enjoyed the cat on my head. She died many years ago (she lived 18 years and was the best cat I ever had)
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:04:00 AM
I have to check out the rules on this one. Did each line have to be a line from one of their songs? If so, wow, yours is very cohesive. That's what makes it one of the best I've read!
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:51:00 PM
With every wish there comes a curse, how true.. depressing images, well done..thanks for the congrats, luv, jag
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