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Time's Up

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June 28, 2025, entered in Tania Kitchin's Summer Funny Limerick contest

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Mom and Dad dodged the mid-July sun— in the shaded pool, having such fun. Then their three little kids started blowing their lids: ”That’s OUR pool. Please go buy yourselves one!”

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2025 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Time's Up" write. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win................

Jim Healey

Date: 7/15/2025 11:18:00 AM

Good one, Janice! Well done.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2025 7:16:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jim! Janice

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 9:40:00 AM

cute Congratulations Janice! :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/15/2025 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Linda! Janice

Terry Miller

Date: 7/14/2025 2:43:00 AM

funny, congratulations

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/14/2025 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Terry. :-) Janice

Christine Watts

Date: 7/13/2025 6:26:00 PM

Hi Tania lol Yes, a good limerick made me laugh. Congrats on you win Cheers Christine

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/13/2025 6:37:00 PM

Thanks so much, Christine. Janice

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:53:00 PM

Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2025 11:15:00 AM

LOL, good one

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/13/2025 6:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jack. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2025 2:45:00 AM

This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I remember those days of three children stepping on my toes and now they step on my heart. Sara K

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/5/2025 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2025 11:17:00 AM

It sounds like it was one of those small plastic kiddy pools then. Great humor and limerick meter

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/1/2025 5:09:00 PM

Yes. Thanks so much, Andrea. I tried find an image that fit, but they all pictured kids in the little pool with the adults. Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2025 10:46:00 AM

lol fun one Janice! hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/28/2025 10:51:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan! Janice