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Whisper whisper in the night Hold your lover oh so tight If in the morn she is gone Somehow you must carry on Secrets secrets lovers share her eyes covered by long hair Do you know her you think so Pleasured moments taken slow Questions questions where did she go Answers not found you do not know She disappeared before daylight Why has your angel taken flight Sorrow sorrow deep in your soul Where she once lived there is a hole You wonder did she ever care as you sit and mournfully stare Shouting shouting to the sky Tears erupting from each eye How could the heavens be so cruel Perhaps you're just a lonely fool Waiting waiting is it true Will there be a lover new Can you trust her you hope so a new person you don't know Smiling smiling ear to ear Your soul mate is finally here Holding her close but not so tight You have no fear that she'll take flight Hours hours become years Happiness grew from your tears Kisses hugs a love that's true She's the perfect one for you Moments moments children two Parents now but not a clue Twins a gift for lovers to share You are such a happy pair

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Date: 11/12/2018 4:35:00 PM
Hi Richard, such a wonderful flowing poem slips from your pen, the images are so wonderful as you paint your canvas with such wonderful images. Your creativity always manages to amaze me my friend. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/1/2018 7:59:00 PM
Aww,a sweet poem of one that met the love destined to be their mate and how life goes on.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Gayle.
Date: 12/11/2017 10:19:00 AM
Lovely and cute..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, sorry I missed this comment.
Date: 11/7/2017 6:15:00 AM
Love the style. Love the words.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/7/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thanks, it's good to see you back.;0)
Date: 11/4/2017 10:31:00 AM
WoW! Such a cool, creative write, Richard. I agree w/Eileen, the opening stanza repetition is ingenious ... it moves this poem like a graceful swan on the pond. Beautiful lost love found story told. Your pen shines as always. Love and peace forever.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/7/2017 8:48:00 AM
Great comment Freddie.
Date: 11/4/2017 8:13:00 AM
All is well that ends well, dear. I found that repetition in the beginning of each line intriguing. It lead well to the finale. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, it was just a bit of oil to try and uncease ge poetic machinery. Hugs back to you.
Date: 11/3/2017 7:20:00 PM
Beautifully done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne.
Date: 11/2/2017 2:08:00 PM
- This float so playful and easy on my lips, a pleasure to read, Richard - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise.
Date: 11/2/2017 12:55:00 PM
To fall in love anew..after losing someone.Indeed .God's plan for us is full of surprises..Sometimes one thinks its the end of everything but it turns out its only the beginning.This is a beautiful poem.Indeed .How happy to read you again Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2017 2:30:00 PM
My pleasure to have you visit Charmaine.
Date: 11/2/2017 4:48:00 AM
This is a beautiful write, so full of love and hope for a wonderful life together, forever! You have expressed loss excellently within the first couple of stanzas, but quickly went on to state about the joy of finding your real soul mate...the happiness that ensues from that is immeasurable! I loved the way you wrote this, your first line-word repetition in each stanza is quite effective my friend! I really enjoyed reading this poem so full of the wonders of life! Great Work Rick!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Russell, I appreciate the thoughtful comment and visit.
Date: 11/1/2017 5:42:00 PM
Amazing amazing poem so bright, you made love possible on that second flight! I loved the repetition signifying twins!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 11/1/2017 1:40:00 PM
Lovely poem Richard--very appealing words and rhythm!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 11/1/2017 12:09:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Richard. I love how you did the repetition. It is so wonderful to people to find a true soul mate :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 11/1/2017 11:44:00 AM
A lot of truth here Richard. Many of us go or have went through this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:40:00 AM
Me as well minus the Twins part *lol*.
Date: 11/1/2017 11:15:00 AM
So lovely when a true love comes along, especially a soul mate.. The flow and rhymes make it sound like a song.. would have been perfect form my love story contest..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:42:00 AM
Sorry I missed it Silent.
Date: 11/1/2017 10:17:00 AM
Dear Richard: Nicely done this sing-song rhyme upon a time. Leon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Leon.
Date: 11/1/2017 9:34:00 AM
Lovely poem :) enjoyed! xomo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/1/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 11/1/2017 9:11:00 AM
Wow wow! Njoyed ~ john
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/1/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks John.

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