Richard Lamoureux Poet Couplet

Times Two

Whisper whisper in the night
Hold your lover oh so tight
If in the morn she is gone
Somehow you must carry on

Secrets secrets lovers share
her eyes covered by long hair
Do you know her you think so
Pleasured moments taken slow

Questions questions where did she go
Answers not found you do not know
She disappeared before daylight
Why has your angel taken flight

Sorrow sorrow deep in your soul
Where she once lived there is a hole
You wonder did she ever care
as you sit and mournfully stare

Shouting shouting to the sky
Tears erupting from each eye
How could the heavens be so cruel
Perhaps you're just a lonely fool

Waiting waiting is it true
Will there be a lover new
Can you trust her you hope so
a new person you don't know

Smiling smiling ear to ear
Your soul mate is finally here
Holding her close but not so tight
You have no fear that she'll take flight

Hours hours become years
Happiness grew from your tears
Kisses hugs a love that's true
She's the perfect one for you

Moments moments children two
Parents now but not a clue
Twins a gift for lovers to share
You are such a happy pair

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Vladislav Raven November 12, 2018 at 4:35 PM Hi Richard, such a wonderful flowing poem slips from your pen, the images are so wonderful as you paint your canvas with such wonderful images. Your creativity always manages to amaze me my friend. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Gayle Rodd January 1, 2018 at 7:59 PM Aww,a sweet poem of one that met the love destined to be their mate and how life goes on. Richard Lamoureux January 2, 2018 at 8:37 AM Thanks Gayle.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 11, 2017 at 10:19 AM Lovely and cute.. Richard Lamoureux January 2, 2018 at 8:38 AM Thanks, sorry I missed this comment.

Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2017 at 6:15 AM Love the style. Love the words. Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2017 at 8:47 AM Thanks, it's good to see you back.;0)

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 4, 2017 at 10:31 AM WoW! Such a cool, creative write, Richard. I agree w/Eileen, the opening stanza repetition is ingenious ... it moves this poem like a graceful swan on the pond. Beautiful lost love found story told. Your pen shines as always. Love and peace forever. Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2017 at 8:48 AM Great comment Freddie.

Eileen Manassian November 4, 2017 at 8:13 AM All is well that ends well, dear. I found that repetition in the beginning of each line intriguing. It lead well to the finale. Hugs Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thanks Eileen, it was just a bit of oil to try and uncease ge poetic machinery. Hugs back to you.

Suzanne C. Goudreau November 3, 2017 at 7:20 PM Beautifully done. Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thanks Suzanne.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2017 at 2:08 PM - This float so playful and easy on my lips, a pleasure to read, Richard - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2017 at 2:15 PM Thanks Anne-Lise.

Charmaine Chircop November 2, 2017 at 12:55 PM To fall in love anew..after losing someone.Indeed .God's plan for us is full of surprises..Sometimes one thinks its the end of everything but it turns out its only the beginning.This is a beautiful poem.Indeed .How happy to read you again Richard. Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2017 at 2:30 PM My pleasure to have you visit Charmaine.

Russell Sivey November 2, 2017 at 4:48 AM This is a beautiful write, so full of love and hope for a wonderful life together, forever! You have expressed loss excellently within the first couple of stanzas, but quickly went on to state about the joy of finding your real soul mate...the happiness that ensues from that is immeasurable! I loved the way you wrote this, your first line-word repetition in each stanza is quite effective my friend! I really enjoyed reading this poem so full of the wonders of life! Great Work Rick!! Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM Thanks Russell, I appreciate the thoughtful comment and visit.

Arthur Vaso November 1, 2017 at 5:42 PM Amazing amazing poem so bright, you made love possible on that second flight! I loved the repetition signifying twins! Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM Thank you, thank you!

Vijay Pandit November 1, 2017 at 1:40 PM Lovely poem Richard--very appealing words and rhythm! Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:37 AM Thanks Vijay.

Heidi Sands November 1, 2017 at 12:09 PM This is a beautiful poem Richard. I love how you did the repetition. It is so wonderful to people to find a true soul mate :) Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:37 AM Thanks Heidi.

Tim Smith November 1, 2017 at 11:44 AM A lot of truth here Richard. Many of us go or have went through this. Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:40 AM Me as well minus the Twins part *lol*.

Silent One November 1, 2017 at 11:15 AM So lovely when a true love comes along, especially a soul mate.. The flow and rhymes make it sound like a song.. would have been perfect form my love story contest.. Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:42 AM Sorry I missed it Silent.

Leon Enriquez November 1, 2017 at 10:17 AM Dear Richard: Nicely done this sing-song rhyme upon a time. Leon Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2017 at 9:46 AM Thanks Leon.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 1, 2017 at 9:34 AM Lovely poem :) enjoyed! xomo Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2017 at 9:42 AM Thanks Maureen.

Lim'Rik Flats November 1, 2017 at 9:11 AM Wow wow! Njoyed ~ john Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thanks John.