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Vernal springtime is departing, Leaving plush carpets of petals, All along scented garden paths, And also in luxuriant meadows. The sun has grown deep orange, With distinct traces of old gold. Stars embedded in purple flash, As moon magic charms the hills. Rosy halcyon days are leaving, And the mellow hours are near.

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Date: 2/17/2022 5:26:00 PM
Oh, those 'mellow hours.' I'll enjoy Spring first, if that's ok -- sitting here watching another snowstorm blanket Chicago. lol. Winter's on the wane now. Sunday the temp will be 50 again. (It was 55 yesterday). Soon the tulips will be up. ~ Dreaming Daily
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2022 10:58:00 AM
With a temperature of 55 degrees, that snow won't be around long. It's very fitting that my birthday is right near the onset of spring. ~ Me Too
Date: 1/28/2022 6:49:00 AM
This is absolutely enchanting! Really gives me sense of the divine within and behind all of nature's resplendent changes -- the tingle of living-time is the eloquent, pervading element-theme of this fine work, that when in the moment of realization, one feels a kinship, while wonderfully entangled between tactile folds of dynamic mystery. Love it! You get a Fav.!
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Date: 1/28/2022 11:33:00 AM
Joe, I thank you with all my heart for all of your lovely, spirit lifting remarks. I am glad that you received joy from these words, and I am gratified by your Fav. Have a nice day, Evelyn
Date: 1/27/2022 6:31:00 AM
Evelyn, your Poem is filled with beautiful metaphors and has a beautiful flowing. I enjoyed reading it. Blessings
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Date: 1/27/2022 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your interest and enthusiasm, my friend. Blessings
Date: 1/27/2022 4:52:00 AM
Love your sun’s description: “The sun has grown deep orange, With distinct traces of old gold” along with other lovely colors and imagery! xx
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Date: 1/27/2022 7:07:00 AM
I'm so pleased! Thank you, Kim. xx
Date: 1/26/2022 11:21:00 PM
The texture of your poems is color. You are so deft at finding the right color.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/27/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of esteem.
Date: 1/26/2022 8:54:00 PM
Great imagery , Evelyn, and feel in your verse. Thank you so much, for your compliment. Blessings to you with a new year
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Date: 1/26/2022 9:26:00 PM
You are quite welcome, Eve. I appreciate your warm remarks. All my best, Evelyn
Date: 1/26/2022 7:08:00 PM
You've revived the vibe of summer, even as it's leaving, and now I look out on the snow, feeling the sadness in my heart. Wonderful creation you've penned, Evelyn. ~ Not so Mellow
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/26/2022 7:45:00 PM
Seasons keep returning, so you're still a lucky fellow! Thank you for your expressions of appreciation. Best wishes, Evelyn
Date: 1/26/2022 6:37:00 PM
Such a lovely, dainty poem, Evelyn. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It almost sounded like a triolet. Nice writing!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/26/2022 7:56:00 PM
Thank you for your thrilling remarks, Milton. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Blessings.

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