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As the snowdrops, tulips, and daffodils sprout, snow melts all about. The air lost its nip, so, icicles drip. Snowflakes, seldom seen, white morphs into green. And to welcome spring, a Robin takes wing. As the snowdrops, tulips, and daffodils sprout there is little doubt, winter’s in timeout. (Rhyme) 05/02/2022 Spring Rhyme - 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Jeanette Brewin

Date: 5/30/2022 10:52:00 PM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/31/2022 8:02:00 AM

Thanks, Jeanette, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 1:23:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative Spring poem!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/15/2022 7:42:00 AM

Thanks, Tania; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/10/2022 9:49:00 AM

Love it Emile especially the thought of a naughty winter taking a time out! Your humor is beautifully blended with your luscious imagery. Congratulations, lauds and accolades for your win! Blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 10:20:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/10/2022 7:11:00 AM

Such a masterly work! Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2022 10:19:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.