Timely Escape

I once met a gal in the town of Monterey Though I had to leave, she begged me to stay Our time together was delightful, I found her to be quite insightful To preserve my happy life ... I hurried away.
written November 5, 2021
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Run! Run for your wife! Ha!
Hankins Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Pure fiction. I've never been to Monterey, although, I have had to run to preserve my life on a few occasions.
Hawkins Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Very fast, I hope....
Hankins Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Strictly fiction, of course, but he knew that getting involved with this woman would change his life...and probably not for the better. Too many times that happens!
Cunningham Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 1:13 PM
And a lucky one by the sound of it lol.
Hankins Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 1:25 PM
I'd say! I've never been to Monterey, but I've met a few women I had to escape from in my time!
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