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Timeless Tulips

Take me where merlot skies serenade songs of serenity, I long for timeless tulips that twirl in beloveds embrace, Where love is a thornless red rose, unfurling eternity, hope thrives with tuscan gold blossoms, sprouting in glistening grace I long for timeless tulips that twirl in beloveds embrace, Fireflies flicker sterling sparks on the creek of my aching heart, hope thrives with tuscan gold blossoms, sprouting in glistening grace I condemn the many sunless mountains that keep us apart Fireflies flicker sterling sparks on the creek of my aching heart, In your unwritten absence, my peace knows no tranquility, I condemn the many sunless mountains that keep us apart, Even the moon envies twin flames, that burn in sheer clarity. In your unwritten absence, my peace knows no tranquility, As we are like wildflowers, wading through a poetic place, Even the moon envies twin flames, that burn in sheer clarity, like divine dahlias lost in a rhythm within cosmic space. As we are like wildflowers, wading through a poetic place, where love is a thornless red rose, unfurling eternity, like divine dahlias lost in a rhythm within cosmic space, Take me where merlot skies serenade songs of serenity.

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Date: 9/10/2023 10:40:00 AM
A beautiful and haunting poem, IE. It must have been a challenging form. I am glad my last poem could touch your heart. I felt that I needed to do it. Best wishes, me!
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:40:00 AM
Thank you sweet soul, you are so kind, i appreciate you doing it truly and it meant more than i can express. Grateful
Date: 8/30/2023 11:34:00 AM
What a fantastic poem. A well written pantoum that I really enjoyed reading. love phyl. Going into a fav.
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much kind soul i appreciate you fave ing it and so happy that you thought this is good enough
Date: 8/28/2023 7:02:00 PM
"Where love is a thornless red rose, unfurling eternity", BEautiful write Empress
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the use of flowers in this well written pantoum. All the beauty of the world cannot replace the loss of love though, but it can help heal the broken heart. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2023 6:56:00 AM
Though this is a much smaller community than what you're used to on Instagram, you seem to have quickly made a niche in a number of hearts here Inky. This tale of longing, yearning, and the agony of separation from a dear one is nicely illustrated by this line: Even the moon envies twin flames that burn in sheer clarity. Let's pray the twain shall indeed meet...
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Date: 8/28/2023 11:24:00 AM
Ah kingy this is so kind of you to say, i appreciate being accepted and im honored to be amongst brilliant poets like you. As you know i handle two communities on instagram so it takes alot of my time there. Hosting prompts etc. but i am truly enjoying being here. Everyone is so kind and talented. And this is a love pantoum hopefully not too cheesy hah thank u always
Date: 8/28/2023 6:40:00 AM
You paint a vivid picture that immerses the reader in your imaginative and metaphorical writing, Ink. The words flow effortlessly, crafting a symphony of rhyme and imagery. Your poem is a wellspring of inspiration, filled with vibrant and evocative descriptions. Every line is meticulously crafted, enhanced by the skillful use of alliteration. The repeated lines intertwine, with a consistent rhythm, and significance. The result is a delightful tapestry of colors that enchants the reader's mind.
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Date: 8/28/2023 11:22:00 AM
Your comments are always much appreciated. Thank you so much for reading my pantoum and for leaving such supportive thoughts
Date: 8/28/2023 5:56:00 AM
Your opening stanza sets the stage for your splendid metaphoric write, Ink. Repeating lines woven seamlessly to maintain the tone and flow and meaning. Delightfully colorful!
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Date: 8/28/2023 11:21:00 AM
Thank u so much for reading and for leaving your profound and supportive thoughts
Date: 8/28/2023 1:50:00 AM
I really liked your title, Timeless Tulips, that would mean Spring is around forever... The season of birth is one full of hope and your poem is full of hope and imagery of beautiful petals and nature that surrounds us... Your poem flows and rhymes very well full of metaphors and descriptive imagery, which can be difficult in a pantoum, especially with a syllable count as you have pulled of here.. You do alliterations very well and what a wonderful addition you are to this community!
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:37:00 AM
Why cant i use emojis here, *rolls my eyes” lol you are so humble , thats a beautiful trait. Hail the king *crown emoji*
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:34:00 AM
There are not such things as kings and queens on an amateur website dear...
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:29:00 AM
In my eyes, you are the king of pantoums, i know you wont like me saying this, but thats my opinion and to receive such accolades from you is a gift. I am truly honored and humbled thank you
Date: 8/27/2023 11:16:00 PM
Inspirational imagery and alliteration abound.
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Date: 8/27/2023 10:20:00 PM
My goshh, such an outstanding pantoum carved with brilliant poetic skills, imageries, alliterations, descriptions, flower-references, colours and what not! I'm blown away by this write.. The rhymes maintain a mellifluous rhythm throughout and I just can't help but swirl in the gardens of these 'timeless tulips'.. Wow! With pure love's embrace, one's soul definitely glides in cosmic spaces and our grief gets erased by a magical spell..."even the moon envies twin flames" Ahh, that's breathtaking!
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Date: 8/28/2023 11:21:00 AM
My lil angelic stat u are truly the best thank u so much for understanding and for leaving such a soulful comment i am forever grateful
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Date: 8/27/2023 10:22:00 PM
"In your unwritten absence, my peace knows no tranquility" So heartfelt and deep.. "Where love is a thornless red rose" I would love to be in such a whimsical world, "sunless mountains" Such ingenuity and creativity has been scribbled by your artistic quill!

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