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Timeless Replica

In eons past the trip was planned. Engineers and artists built sturdy, a symbol just in case Practice-runs of engines, materials and design, were left in place as a marker at their base A hop, then a skip to a new world from the old, assured their symbol would not be defaced On arrival in a desert, a replica was built, reflecting a potent symbol that time has not erased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/23/2010 1:20:00 PM
Enjoyed first time round, even more the second time Audrey. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn' out of this world contest >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations Audrey for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:32:00 PM
vEry nicely done, Audrey. Congrats on your HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations Audrey on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Audrey
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:42:00 PM
Congrats my BFF on your HM in this contest... a wonderful write and honor to enjoy with luv.. my friend..
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:26:00 AM
I like the way you told this story in verse form, Audrey. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:41:00 PM
Kool couplet Audrey, there's something special about this little piece >> James
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Date: 9/12/2010 4:53:00 PM
I see you entered the contest about this! Good one, Audrey. And yes, health care is so expensive, you have to be a millionaire today to get a serious disease. It's all very disheartening. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/12/2010 12:00:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:10:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Audrey! I'll be on the road today going home. I'll look for your blog before I leave. Love, Carolyn
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